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Antika7 [2019-05-10 18:00:28 +0000 UTC]
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Your character, at first glance, looks mysterious underlined by her colored her and magic light. I would guess that she is confident and maybe a bit arrogant on the one hand from the more triangular face and her smile and on the other hand from her relaxed pose.
The clothing style suggests a universe with a magical society that has its own style. The bright shirt framed by the dark trouser and hair gives the image a lively look. The high collar, communicator, and belt give it a uniform like a look suggesting at least a bigger institution which the character is a member of. The shirt's design is lovely and follows the body's contours nices. The trouser for me seems to flat, missing folds at the knees or where the trouser meets the ground.
The anatomy looks very natural, and the split ear fits right in. The shading in the round areas as the left arm and legs for me seems a bit too hard, even for cell shading. Through this especially the arm looks flat. A smoother look could be archived through lightly blurring the inner shadow edge. Additionally, the light reflex on the hair seems a bit too high. Considering that the fire is between her neck and chest hight wise, I would have expected light reflexes on the side or lower curves of her hair.
All in all the character is nicely introduced, and the image transmits her personality nicely with many little details.
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AlexandeNight In reply to Antika7 [2019-05-11 18:32:25 +0000 UTC]
Thank you kindly for the in depth critique!
Lilly has an unusual psychology. She's half human, half demon, and it makes her come off as a bit predatory. People often mistake her as arrogant, but really, she's just unapologetic herself 100% of the time and tends to be very blunt/honest. This can be off-putting but you never have to wonder where she is coming from.
She's probably wearing a dress uniform from the Academy (a school for humans that specializes in training human to kill demons, among other things). Members are able to modify their uniforms to fit their personal fighting style. Half-bloods are taboo in her world, and since demons would be able to seance what her heritage, she decided to take her chances with humans. Living with the humans means that she has access to their technology, always a plus. That being said, she can't openly use her magic as that would be likely to get her killed. So when she is able to able to use it, she gets a bit showy.
Hmm, those are fair points. the pants are a bit flat and the shading could be indeed be smother and there could be more folds around her knees. I appreciate you bringing these things to my attention. I have gone back and made a few small edits in regards to the lighting and shading, and will keep the knee folds in mind for future works. I have been trying to develop a minimalist approach to shading to be used on possible web-comics. But that technique is only good so long as it looks right.
Thank you once more for the in depth critique. It is greatly appreciated ^^
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AlexandeNight In reply to Preston-Draws63 [2019-07-24 03:37:55 +0000 UTC]
Thank you kindly, I'm glad you think so ^^
I took the opportunity to play with some new effects
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AlexandeNight In reply to ApocalypseMistress52 [2019-03-27 13:34:01 +0000 UTC]
She is a half blood demon. Her mum was a human Mistologist and her dad was a very powerful pure blood by the name of XiaDock. Because she's a half blood, magic doesn't really come easy to her. But that doesn't stop Lilly from showing off! XD
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TheAsianGuyLOL [2019-03-15 02:57:49 +0000 UTC]
FIRE!!!! xD
Cool work of her! <333
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AlexandeNight In reply to TheAsianGuyLOL [2019-03-15 17:11:32 +0000 UTC]
XD Yeah, she's such a show off!
Thanks! I'm glad you like it ^^
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AlexandeNight In reply to DarkShosh [2019-03-09 19:24:15 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I'm glad you think so ^^
I was having some fun with the fire
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Anime--Bunny [2019-03-06 05:43:33 +0000 UTC]
very fantastic work
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AlexandeNight In reply to Anime--Bunny [2019-03-06 05:52:47 +0000 UTC]
Thank you kindly, I'm glad you think so ^^
I had to do a pic of Lilly~
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