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theyoungestbrony [2015-12-05 03:31:10 +0000 UTC]
friends on the other side...
was i the only one thinking this?!?!?!
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SchroBest [2014-09-02 19:25:42 +0000 UTC]
AWESOME!!
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SchroBest In reply to AlexisRoyce [2014-09-02 22:04:05 +0000 UTC]
Oh you're welcome! ^^
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AlexisRoyce In reply to Hokova [2014-09-02 20:38:02 +0000 UTC]
HOM NOM NOM.
Thanks, and especially for not being too scared to give a little crit! The whole layout bothers me; I wish I'd been able to structure it better. The left side is too heavy; I don't think the pile of papers adds enough weight to the right side. And all that empty space in the middle needs something, but I couldn't figure out what. D:
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AlexisRoyce In reply to Hokova [2014-09-06 16:35:33 +0000 UTC]
Hmmm, that's a good idea, compositionally. Henry still needs to be behind Anna, but perhaps I could've used the smoke better.
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shylarah [2014-09-02 03:54:36 +0000 UTC]
I like it!Β I am especially fond of how you made the S in Sire into a bookmark.
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shylarah In reply to AlexisRoyce [2014-09-02 11:31:07 +0000 UTC]
Bah.Β Never judge a book by its title.Β This is so much better than a vampire book.
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AlexisRoyce In reply to shylarah [2014-09-02 20:35:37 +0000 UTC]
Vampire stories can be good too. ^_^ I just don't want people to expect something they won't get.
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shylarah In reply to AlexisRoyce [2014-09-02 22:57:24 +0000 UTC]
They can be, but I'm pretty sure Sire tops just about every vampire story I've read.Β Except maybe Mortifer, but that wasn't just a vampire story.
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AlexisRoyce In reply to shylarah [2014-09-06 16:35:54 +0000 UTC]
Haha, yeah, Mortifer was more a demon story than anything else.
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