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Published: 2011-02-21 21:56:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 143381; Favourites: 6218; Downloads: 1654
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i think your review was fair not him no longer requesting critiquesΒ
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Nice idea, but portrayed badly. I have no idea what's going on in this picture. She walks around and sees a portal to Hell or another dimension or somewhere, then takes off her mask in the next panel. What exactly is happening?
For composition, the first panel's background is too small for the size of the character. The person should take up about 1/20th of the space in the panel, not 1/6th. It makes her look like a giant, since those buildings are too close together. The other panels are all okay, in terms of composition.
For the editing part, you did a great job making everything look neat, but you should have chosen a different color theme.
Overall, it looks pretty but not perfect.
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I dont think you get it because you dont read the comic series (it makes perfect sense to me)
Since you cant seem to figure it out, its a girl 'captain' lost in the post nuclear fall-out who finds some kind of illusion of a paradise coaxing her to take off her mask (hence the title 'Temptation')
Furthermore, your criticism about a figure taking up 1/20th of the image? Who are you to tell someone how ART is done? There arent rules only suggestions, otherwise art would just be another science
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Unfair. The reaction of seeing a piece of untouched green by a girl stranded in postapocalyptic mess (probably all her life) is really not so hard to understand. Maybe it's just you.
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I disagree.... I think you might be looking at this the wrong way as far as portrayal.
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Captain Meesh will lead us the the Promised Land.
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Anyone know what gun she's using? It's the same as the one used in Romantically Apocalyptic comic 42 that Snippy uses, I can't find the model name.
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Its most likely an fictional weapon so there iswn't one (at least until the author gives it one). But if you ask me it looks similar to an SR3 Vikhr.
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Found this comic awhile ago! Love it! Didn't know this person was a girl! cool!
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She'll live so put her in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! And keep Stalky alive!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *takes off jacket to reveal poorly made Stalky fangirl tee*
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0w0 ... it's like a weird ... Snippy/Captain hybred ... 8D
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Its been almoast a year now, will we ever get to see this character in the main series?
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This artwork is kinda old, from before I started reading RA actually, and yet we havent seen the character yet, which is a shame... Romantically Apocalyptic could use a female character, although honestly Im not really sure how you would introduce her to the guys since she seems to have found a safeplace where she can hide from the nuclear madness (safe enough to take off her mask even). At least thats how I understand the story here. But then its a bit more artsy than the rest of the comic, so it might not be canon.
I dont know if youre gonna use the winner of the "original character" contest, but it would be pretty sweet if you did, especially if its a female character, which I think a lot of the entries will be.
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wow i just noticed that she is like a mix of zee captain, snippy and pilot!
and to think i just noticed.
wow.
i love your artwork to!
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I realized that, too. At first I really only thought it was Mr. Snippy only, though.
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I wonder; How is this relevant to litarature?
Is it even remotely applicable to literature?
Is it based off a comic? (RA = red alert, I know that much), a book of sorts?
I ask this mainly because, its one of the most popular literature pieces of all time according to dA, and I don't seem to note the literature part :/
Its a cool piece of art though.
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Hops, never mind about the red alert part.
Still, its literature just because its a comic? or are other reasons also involved?
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Its Ra, Romantically Apocalyptic. Here is the link: [link]
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... its why I said never mind
thanks anyway.
Btw, your whole comic collection of it is really awesome, though I do find it odd to read everything from the newest to the oldest :3
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is this an assassin to try to get pilot and photoshops allegence to change? or get them confuzzled? that would make a good storyline
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Cool, but why is she wearing makeup? Somehow I feel that in this world lip gloss and dusty blue eyeshadow aren't of high priority.
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i want more character... and she would be perfekt
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I love your art so much ahhhh <3
but I have to say this... I wish you'd draw different looking women besides your finance. I'm not being negative against her because I totally get that she's your muse and all... but seeing more diversity in your ladies, especially for RA; would be interesting
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hi can i ask, what medium did you use? 
superb work btw! really amazing! keep up the good work
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No! Not a woman! Women ruin everything, trust me!
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I love Captain, I love her even more now !
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Is that a waterfall that she sees in the next to last panel, beyond the ruined building?
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its probably not gonna get that many favs, BESIDES SHE CAN'T BE A CHARACTER FOR HER FACE HAS BEEN SEEN! THAT MEANS SHE WILL EITHER A: Get mutated and radioactive like all of the straws in the world except for Zee Captain's 2. A beast will consume her soul or C. She will want to see the faces of Zee Captain, Zee Snipy, Zee Engineer, und Zee Pilot.
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Oh wow, when I came to here it said 6,666.....
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for favorites i mean.
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DUDE... You are the BEST! Nothing more need to say
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