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alik — My life.
Published: 2003-11-28 12:59:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 396; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 71
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Description I live like tortured souls,
To me theres no beginning to the day
and no end.
I awake feeling cold, empty, dead.
My dreams are dark, like the shadow
which haunts my every move.
I try to forget heartache, pain and sorrow,
But I am just reminded of the future,
which will contain these three demons.
When i die nothing will have changed,
No one will notice, my haunting dreams will
still live on.
I am dead.
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Comments: 11

lilpinkypine [2004-08-09 12:08:21 +0000 UTC]

Wow awesome work Ali!!

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zoezoey [2004-06-03 15:14:34 +0000 UTC]

well put together verse, very good, am impressed

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philippa2004 [2004-01-18 18:05:41 +0000 UTC]

Yes .....
Mmmm
I think its a good poem Ali
But like Rach said!
Cant you draw!?
Do some drawing!!




Please take some time 2 look @ my DA'S!!
Thanx!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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rachae1 [2003-12-21 17:01:59 +0000 UTC]

good description!!!!!!! cant u draw????!!!!

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KittD [2003-12-05 05:15:16 +0000 UTC]

you are the voice of ansty teens everywhere lol
it is nicely put together...and speaks out too

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pete-aeiko [2003-12-01 10:38:28 +0000 UTC]

nice put together...

safe work!

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fucked-pixie [2003-11-29 20:20:49 +0000 UTC]

wow thats lush. and so true.

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sugabear [2003-11-29 03:23:44 +0000 UTC]

Very good poem. I'm sure everyome has felt/gone through those feelings at some point in their lives. Whiles others go through it everyday. Nicely done

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SoftlyBeatenSoul [2003-11-28 22:19:43 +0000 UTC]

.::raises hand::. me, me, me! I'm relieved to know you aren't going through this. It sucks. :smile:

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TiMe-iS-ouRS [2003-11-28 17:59:50 +0000 UTC]

A bit depressing for my taste, but great job. Really expressive with such few words.

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rozette [2003-11-28 14:43:59 +0000 UTC]

simple words, yet they express so much.

good work.

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