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Published: 2006-05-26 08:02:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 1715; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 97
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Description I have this scene in my head where Elphaba is walking around Shiz during finals week. Everyone's playing pranks, mostly the seniors, to throw everyone off. Elphaba walks right into this idiot girl with a bucket of water. The girl picks on Elphaba randomly, and the more Elphaba starts to get more frightened, the more the girl taunts. Eventually, she tosses the water right at Elphaba's face.

Elphaba screams and tries to cover herself. The flesh of the left side of her face, ear, and hand are hit. She screams instantly. It is like acid tearing through her skin, the chemical reaction causing a sizzling sound. The the innitial splash was traumatizing, but it just keeps eating into her flesh, creating boils every few moments and bursting the next repeatedly over her body.

Needless to say, she's in agony. Plus there is now blood seeping between the wounds.

NO ONE can believe what is going on. The girl who threw the bucket is staring in horror, frozen in place.

Glinda happens to walk by the oddly still crowd and peers over the shoulders of her classmates only to see Elphaba kneeling on the floor with water slowly creeping towards her, and she's making these horrible, animalistic sounds of pain. Glinda screams and pushes past the shocked crowd, grabbing her roommate by the shoulders. Elphaba loses balance and falls into Glinda, nearly unconcious.
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Comments: 19

DuskanDawn [2013-07-06 15:45:30 +0000 UTC]

She's...she's ok right?

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charmednwicked [2006-11-02 05:53:58 +0000 UTC]

wow that's intense, but nice job

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Aliquis01 In reply to charmednwicked [2006-11-17 06:02:01 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! XD

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R-H-R-D [2006-06-26 05:36:46 +0000 UTC]

Ow...fuck. You don't just throw water at someone who's allergic to it, you stupid schoolgirl!

*seethe*

...ANYway, moving on to the picture itself... The gore is nicely done (if that's even possible...). It's not overly done, but it's just enough to be very effective.

And, again, Glinda's expression is perfect. Complete shock, horror, and a good dose of "OMGWTF" (Or "OMLWTF" if you want to be obsessive) thrown in for good measure.

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Aliquis01 In reply to R-H-R-D [2006-06-26 08:33:35 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! No tmany people commented on this one, and it's one of my favorites. It is my first shot at gore, but you know what's funny...I keep thinking that for some reason this Galinda looks a bit like I Love Lucy.

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R-H-R-D In reply to Aliquis01 [2006-06-26 14:35:51 +0000 UTC]

Verreh welcome! Gore is fun unless it's way overused in a horror film. Then it's cheesy and irritating.

...*looks again* o_o You're right. I shall never think of I Love Lucy the same way again.

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R-H-R-D In reply to Aliquis01 [2006-06-26 14:35:26 +0000 UTC]

Verreh welcome! Gore is fun unless it's way overused in a horror film. Then it's cheesy and irritating.

...*looks again* o_o You're right. I shall never think of I Love Lucy the same way again.

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WinstonTA [2006-05-29 22:09:32 +0000 UTC]

Holy crap, this is amazing. Even the description is great Keep up the great work!

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Aliquis01 In reply to WinstonTA [2006-05-30 06:23:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! If you go back to "Allergy" and "Eek..." you'll see they are enlarged now, if you're interested. Stupid computers.

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sadako-yamamura [2006-05-28 01:31:45 +0000 UTC]

Oh my god, I love this piece. Poor Elphaba, I love the way you drew the burns very gruesome.

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Aliquis01 In reply to sadako-yamamura [2006-05-29 03:54:00 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! Just so you know, I intend to make it bigger. There was an issue with transfering it between computers or something. O_o But thanks! I've been practicing expressions and yes... I was thinking about how no one draws or writes about Elphaba being hit by water. Just seemed like a good excuse for gore.

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123samsam123 [2006-05-26 21:51:07 +0000 UTC]

sry for double post!!!

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Aliquis01 In reply to 123samsam123 [2006-05-29 03:52:53 +0000 UTC]

No problem. Gave me an ego boost.

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123samsam123 [2006-05-26 21:50:44 +0000 UTC]

I love the way Glinda is reacting to alll of this, you show a lot of emotion! Keep up the great work!

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Aliquis01 In reply to 123samsam123 [2006-05-29 03:52:36 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! By the way, your quote is hilarious. I love book!Elphaba.

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123samsam123 In reply to Aliquis01 [2006-05-29 12:33:57 +0000 UTC]

Oh and no problem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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123samsam123 In reply to Aliquis01 [2006-05-29 12:33:39 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE that quote too!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's one of my fravortie parts of the book too

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123samsam123 [2006-05-26 21:49:39 +0000 UTC]

COOLNESSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really like Galind's reaction to all of this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I <3 it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

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Aliquis01 In reply to 123samsam123 [2006-05-29 03:51:56 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! I'm trying to get it bigger. I messed up somehow in transfering it from computers. @_@ But thanks! I've been practicing expressions!

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