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Description when I look at the ground


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I don't have premium membership so I can't request a critique, but I need it. I'd be grateful (and I mean 'Llama grateful') for any kind of constructive comment.
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RavenRyusuCreative [2012-04-17 21:49:38 +0000 UTC]

It does look like butterfly wings, I'm assuming this is what you're trying to accomplish.
You have a nice use of the rule of 3rd's, there's alot of strong lines in the image that really lead you round the composition and draw you in.

Also a suggestion, maybe if you have Photoshop or other editing software, when you think about contrast you should think about the different textures, like the bottom left corner looks slightly over-grainy but it still looks nice, maybe this was your intention?

Hope this helped.
Raven

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shimphotography [2012-04-15 23:09:12 +0000 UTC]

I saw butterfly wings straight away. Beautiful shot.

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transcendelia [2012-03-31 19:42:27 +0000 UTC]

looks like butterfly wings but ones broken

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solie-solie [2012-03-31 19:38:49 +0000 UTC]

I can see a sad face . It kind of fits with the black and white style

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atlantis-pirate [2012-03-31 19:22:33 +0000 UTC]

I like the contrast!

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siskin [2011-11-27 21:36:03 +0000 UTC]

Good abstract shot with pleasing contrast and textures

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