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alittlehope — One Thought
Published: 2005-01-05 02:57:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 101; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 2
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Description
It’s a thoughtConcealed behind a face
You’ll never know its there
Never know its effect
The fear
The questions
The frustration
One thought can cause
One thought multiplied
Into a dozen
Reeking havoc
Of unknown disaster
Questions hidden
Frustration Dealt
Fear taken
Hidden behind a smile
Of no true cause
A scream
A whack
A pool of tears
This thought unhandled
You have to listen
Let me talk
Don’t turn away
I’ve seen that turn
To many a time
You’ve done it again
You’ve turned away
To a life of yours
One I want apart of
This thought
still remains hidden
Reeking its havoc
Spreading its fear
If you had listened
Id still be here
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Comments: 9
very cool, very cool indeed, ur talented u shuld publish sum stuf
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wow, u really think? thanx ALOT 
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havoc
i dont mean to sound stupid but hat the hell does that mean lol
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look in a dictionary
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good job, the ending is the best part in my opinion, powerful, see what happens if u repeat the first stanza at the very begining...i like it
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This poem has potential... Maybe you should develop on your ideas...
Hmmm... your lines are too disjointed thus the flow isn't there...
The flow in a poetry can express emotions n if u can master that, ur poems can be a lot better...
But i like the ideas that you have...
Hope you dun mind the critique...
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heh i dont mind it at all....helps you learn from it to
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