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allskool89 — slushy mood.. i luv ya.. boi

Published: 2005-05-04 14:54:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 123; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 4
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Description You watched out for me,
You were always there for me,
That was how we first met,
I can still remember,
How you calmed me down,
When everybody else stood watching,
You gave me hope when I was hopeless,
Your heart is pure,
Untainted unlike everybody else's,
You were always there to help me,
I tried to help you back,
But I knew you always gave me more,
You were the only one,
Who watched out for me,
You cared for me, I'm so touched,
I care for you in return,
I tried to watch over you, to protect you,
But you deed was more than mine,
How can I ever repay you?
I feel your gaze on me,
Everything is going to be alright,
You touch me more than anybody else,
Your feelings for me are real,
The seriousness of your silent gaze,
I never knew someone would care for me this much,
I take back my word for suicide,
You showed me that there's more to life,
Not just a meaningless void,
I don't want to leave, to leave you,
You suffer too,
Some of your hardships like mine,
I am sorry for you, I care,
You are the only one I have ever cared for,
You were always there for me,
In spite of your suffering,
I can tell a lot from your gaze,
Your existence in my life,
Gave me deep, meaningful feelings, emotions,
I don't want to lose,
Someone rare like you,
You suffer like me,
But you were always the one protecting me,
I am forever in debt,
Thanks,
I love you.
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Comments: 6

xsweetsilencex [2006-11-20 07:44:34 +0000 UTC]

this is a great "poem" ahah doesnt matter if it does have fancy words cause, its good heaps of emotion in it!

cool first fav

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allskool89 In reply to xsweetsilencex [2006-11-20 11:28:54 +0000 UTC]

lol thx. i didnt feel it last time when i put it up on dA but now i feel kinda embarassed by it.... damn especially the title nxt 2 tha rose... *cringe*

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xsweetsilencex In reply to allskool89 [2006-11-20 11:55:37 +0000 UTC]

naaa the title is fine

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allskool89 In reply to xsweetsilencex [2006-11-21 09:53:06 +0000 UTC]

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allskool89 [2005-05-08 01:28:30 +0000 UTC]

thx

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linteli [2005-05-06 15:41:05 +0000 UTC]

This is really great! I really can feel the similarity towards these words. You've described the situation so sweetly. Me likes!

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