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AllTerrain1017 — Starscream and Irene

Published: 2008-05-18 22:57:20 +0000 UTC; Views: 260; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description In honest opinion via artist....This picture needs HELP! *slams head into meat grinder*

I wasn't paying attention to anything on this peice, except the color. tell me what's wrong without being too mean. :3

Time:45min.-1.5 hrs

materials: copics and comp paper.
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Comments: 4

GreeniePixie019 [2008-09-05 21:00:00 +0000 UTC]

well I think both characters here are short >< star could use some more body length around the stomach/abs. he also needs more leg length and a little neck length. Irene could use some stomach length. Her arms are kinda funny lookn.. maybee you could try having her arms around the back of his neck?

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unichi13 [2008-05-19 22:08:10 +0000 UTC]

hey its sarah!!!
over all its really good but starscreams feet seem kinda small...especially since he's a giy

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unichi13 In reply to unichi13 [2008-05-20 22:26:31 +0000 UTC]

duhduhduh! on ur bus but u no that now^_^
uuuhgg!i need a scanner!!!!

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AllTerrain1017 In reply to unichi13 [2008-05-20 01:24:25 +0000 UTC]

yeah, someon pointed that out on the original. so, I'm going to do it again. *shrugs*

.....sarah? :3~(?)

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