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Published: 2014-02-17 19:49:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 682; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 0
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Kasumi Goto from Mass Effect. Holy crap, I have to say, I didn't think she would be sooo difficult. After all the other well-defined characters, needing to do this soft shading was quite a challenge! I'm not super happy with how it turned out. Also, the scanning always seems to screw things up a little and I suddenly see tiny tiny things I'm not content with. But it's ok for a first try (being my own most relentless critic as usual
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***EDIT 18.02.14: Thanks to my wonderful commenters, now with new nose ! Let me know what you think.***
HB & 8b pencils, graphite. Shading with blenders and fingers.
Thanks for watching! Comments and constructive criticism are very welcome!
Character belongs to Bioware.
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Comments: 15
Sieht super aus
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Danke dir
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I really like it my friend! The nose kinda looks... weird to me but I don't know exactly why. Really great job.
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Thank you! Concerning the nose, the commenter below had the same idea apparently - I didn't really see that before, so thanks for pointing that out
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^.^ Always glad to help, and it looks especially good now!
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Thank you a gazillion times for your feedback !!
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Very good. This is a really good job. Just one *small* criticism: for me, the nose is a bit strange. It appears flat and lacks a little relief. The other parts are very good, especially the play of light and shadow on the eyes.
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Thank you very much! And also for your criticism, that was very helpful to point out to me, thanks a lot
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You're welcome. I would gladly see your update.
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Great, I'll put out a note as soon as I've made the changes
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Oh, it looks certainly better. Good job !
Just one last thing (you have the right to hate me: p): the tip of the nose be a little flat. Maybe the shadow goes too far in the nose (well, I don't if what I have just written sound english, sorry...)
(I hope I did not bore you with these small criticisms. They are ridiculous in comparison of the quality of your work.)
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Thank you! And no, I won't hate you for taking the time and giving me useful advice on getting better
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So you are very welcome ! 
I'm afraid that wasn't what I wanted to say. (yes, yes, yes, I suck in english but I swear, I'm trying to improve my english spoken ! xD).
Well, I think it is on the upper alar cartilage : the shadow is there too thick. You could erase it a little by making a small round (or better, a somewhat elongated oval) at the tip of the nose.
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Yeah, ok, now I think I know what you mean. Difficult anatomical vocabulary, I don't even know the German word for that
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Sorry, I had a problem with my computer. *the tip of the nose seems to be. (I mean : its curve)
And as I said, this is a really good job.
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