Comments: 8
fan056 [2019-01-27 09:58:12 +0000 UTC]
That was a pleasant reading ^^
And just like him, i would buy one of those suits the fastest i could XD
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Garahs [2017-10-28 04:37:57 +0000 UTC]
You need to break this up into paragraphs. It's somewhat unreadable right now.
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robotic-obsession [2017-07-07 22:47:02 +0000 UTC]
I liked it a lot!
The only thing on my mind though, was the lack of entering between some of the sentences. It would read more easily, more natural.
Keep up the good work!
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robogirls [2017-02-04 23:52:35 +0000 UTC]
i like it its neat how they started out girls
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SUPPERJOMAN In reply to robogirls [2018-05-22 19:15:43 +0000 UTC]
Well, it didn't really seem like they "transformed" traditionally anyways, just put their body into metal suits that can't be taken off which move on their own
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