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stretchya [2021-09-20 07:20:38 +0000 UTC]
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Forcedlactationlover [2017-06-10 01:09:26 +0000 UTC]
Unusual wish fulfillment, with the agent of causation not fully clear (to me, although I have an idea). Good character, nicely written. (Seems to obey all the rules. When I'm not sure, I simply make it 'Mature Content'. Saves worry.) I like it.
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alonesomesoul In reply to Oppai-Exedra [2010-01-18 19:48:37 +0000 UTC]
Thanks! I try to make my endings interesting or at least fitting.
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gaforb [2009-06-14 19:23:08 +0000 UTC]
Wow, great job.
Pretty much the same feelings about this as my other comment. Although this had a bit less backstory, so overall I think Bemusement was better.
-Bobby
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alonesomesoul In reply to gaforb [2009-06-14 20:34:04 +0000 UTC]
Ah, well that is perfectly understandable, considering I wrote Bemusement after this one. I always hope to be improving. Thank you for the watch again. I'll try my best not to disappoint!
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OshitarisCrayon [2009-06-14 17:26:06 +0000 UTC]
Lovelovelove! Great job! Well written, interesting. I wish my writing was that good. X3
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alonesomesoul In reply to OshitarisCrayon [2009-06-14 17:52:57 +0000 UTC]
Why thank you very much. Have you any ideas/suggestions as to what you would like to see in the future?
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OshitarisCrayon In reply to alonesomesoul [2009-06-14 19:10:39 +0000 UTC]
Haha, unfortunately I cannot offer you anything that comes to mind, considering I drew a blank when you asked me, haha! I'm sure you will be able to think of something soon though, surely.
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dkilla390 [2009-04-04 04:41:21 +0000 UTC]
Good work very nice for your first story, you should continue writing you have a lot of potential maybe even enough to make it into the Expansion Writers.
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avon22889 [2009-04-04 01:23:58 +0000 UTC]
nice!no mistakes,charismatic story,strong structure.its immaculate.
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SythDracous [2009-04-04 00:00:07 +0000 UTC]
Well done!
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gdpr-8287979 [2009-04-03 23:58:47 +0000 UTC]
Very nice. Excellent. That was certainly a different method than what I'm used to. Great job!
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