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phillGH [2009-02-03 23:40:37 +0000 UTC]
the flow in this changed a lot.....might need a bit of work and the "cast down" line was used a bit much
otherwise pretty win
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ALostMind In reply to phillGH [2009-02-04 00:23:04 +0000 UTC]
Its a narrative, its not really flowy...
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phillGH In reply to ALostMind [2009-02-04 02:25:21 +0000 UTC]
it does work...but i'd recomend just keeping the same beat throughout the whole thing unless
you change styles halfway through it
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B00KAH0LIC In reply to ALostMind [2009-02-03 22:49:12 +0000 UTC]
Welcome! ^^
Yup! I think I should go listen to Breaking Benjamin, I haven't in a pretty long time.
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