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alpal — stop glancing

Published: 2004-02-03 01:43:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 18
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Description So childish, yet always so far,
Now, i'm sure i seem,
Like b4 now and,
Its trappings
still favouring that dream.

Implying that we're really without,
And rather than sleep,
We save all the exchanges,
with nothing more than this to keep.
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Comments: 3

simmo [2004-07-07 06:18:41 +0000 UTC]

wow thats deep. Just one thing, txt language distracts the reader (in my opinion) from the poem. That is unless it was intended. All in all a great poem, well done

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alpal In reply to simmo [2004-07-07 11:34:43 +0000 UTC]

thanks man

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defpoet [2004-04-29 01:34:11 +0000 UTC]

woa.
i, really like this.
took me a few times before i understood it...though..i probably didnt even understand that lol.

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