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Published: 2016-03-31 00:38:13 +0000 UTC; Views: 4139; Favourites: 271; Downloads: 0
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Feedback would be welcome <3 (pls be harsh)--------------------
Blake from RWBY
I'm not to sure about this one, I only made it because I wanted to do some coloured lighting practice and I THINK I made it all a little too red.Β
"a little"
I'm not too fond of the finished thing, but oh well
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can't find much fault in this, it's beautiful ; v ;
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Honestly, if I had to give any feedback, I'd say that the background just looks incomplete or rushed. I think you were going for an out of focus look, but it doesn't come off as that for me. Blake would be in focus, and the background would be out of focus, yes?Β
Maybe you were going for a blurry look, as if she were using her shadow technique and moving swiftly, and we're following her rapid movement? If so, it also fails to do this.Β
But still, this is an amazing piece. The pose looks cool but isn't so over-the-top that I'd ask, "Won't she fall over like that?"
Kudos!Β
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gotta escape an evil facility but you remembered you wanted to play twister
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The redΒ lighting is perfect, don't worry about that. The only things that look a bit weird are Blake's chest and left hand, but that might be because of the perspective. Impressive piece ^^
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Wow I'm stunned! Perfect coloring, great pose and cute face(only because you wanted harsh feedback: maybe it's a little too cute for Blake)
A great picture (and the red is perfect
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this looks great and I love the background. I think the scene would definetly be a little more red over all. I would also say that the reflected light shouldnt be as bright and the same color as the direct light. Her left breast also seems to be either falling off or stretching or something (the lower one). other than that the face looks really good. it definetly fits the anime character, if you want to push her a little more realistic then you could add a little more depth to the eyes.
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Thank you!
And thanks for the advice, I'm already trying to put it into practice!
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you are unsure about it.
personally, i think you hit it out of the park.
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to much? or not enough! Considering the lighting in this room is only red wouldn't the entire scene be somewhat red shifted because of that?
either way the pose, colors/shading and background look great
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