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Published: 2013-03-05 14:04:47 +0000 UTC; Views: 4770; Favourites: 27; Downloads: 0
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Nala and Kovus day-light colors are different to these, because here I also used a red-layer.

Ok I checked the page before uploading but there are still some mistakes...
Whithout -> without
cream -> scream
uf-> if


Character Kovu and Nala belongs to disney.
Art by me.
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Comments: 5

Schizoid3 [2016-01-10 07:17:03 +0000 UTC]

You misspelled many things actually, but that doesn't mean that the story is bad. I think you should get a beta-reader. :3

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Mr-Scarlet-Nokitsune [2013-03-11 06:15:29 +0000 UTC]

You misspelled scream as 'cream' fifth panel.

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Settembra [2013-03-05 22:12:18 +0000 UTC]

Nice begin ^^ Keep going ^^

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Altraion100 In reply to Settembra [2013-03-06 06:24:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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Settembra In reply to Altraion100 [2013-03-06 10:16:59 +0000 UTC]

Your welcome ^^

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