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Published: 2006-10-15 00:04:00 +0000 UTC; Views: 1337; Favourites: 43; Downloads: 17
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uhm well - - I'm not sure if i gonna go n vacation with my parents or not XDI'll just put it this time - -
I wanna try drawing the body like real person so - - it turns out like this
-photoshop CS
- - that's for now , I gotta go sleep ahaha - -"
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Wonderful design on her pretty dress. The posing and anatomical prespectives turned out really good too.
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this is my fav from you n_n
i love the outfit :3 very nice
i like how its transparent
and i liking the eyes
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Hmm, nice face, but if you want to make it real-style, then you should adjust the ratio (make the eyes smaller), I think you can refer Tony's artwork. Besides that, I think the others is ok, though I thought her body didn't match the ratio of the head (big body compared to the head size... >.< ). But it's your 1st try, so it's really impressive for a new attempt, don't you think? ^_^ I also got my own 1st attempt, you'll know soon enough after I put them in my gallery. ^_^
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aye XD I'll try do it better next time XD
i'll lookign forward to see yours
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First of all, the colours look really nice with those pastel colours. It makes the scenery feel dream-like. The outfit is nice, it's less naked than most bikinis are. I like the chains on it too. The eyes themselves look nice to, and I think it was a good choice of you to make them blue, because both green and brown would've ruined the pastel theme. The way you coloured the skin also looks nicely and realistic. It's a good thing you went for soft-shading on this drawing, because it once again emphatizes the dream-likeness of the drawing.
However, I think it would've been an improvement if you had drawn the background yourself, because (although you seem to have changed the colours) it looks a bit harsh and pixelly, and that's what kind of ruins the nice scenery you had set up with your drawing itself. The shoulders seem to be too broad, or it's because the trunk is too small. What I also noticed it that you used an anime face on a realistically shaped head, and that makes her head seem a bit too fat and her eyes a bit too big. Yet I don't know if you wanted to keep it anime or realistic, so ignore that comment if it's the first. You could make her neck a little longer, which would make the shoulders less broad and the face less thick. The arm on the right has a weird bend it that most arms have, but not that emphatized. However, the breasts look really natural.
If this was your first time drawing a realistic body, I have to say you did a great job. I hope that the next time you draw a body, you'll also keep my tips in your mind, and it'll turn out perfect.
Good luck!
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oh thank you very much I'll keep that in mind duh XD
well it's my first time trying XD
um um ><
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how do you do that?
i just dont see how you can get everything perportioned and look nice and its seems like your constantly added artwork!!!!
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a the beach havent been there in years -_- such a lonely life. but i like ur outfit 
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normally a pic like this one deserve at least 89 favs (9 favs per hour) it's so well splendid. this time, yu cleaned the lineart, Alu. good.
Also, the beach is a classic landscap that i like, seriously. this girl, her body, so hot. and, o joy, her eyes are well made. i wonder how yu did this... ah ah, nevamind. everyone has his secrets. ;]
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thank you shadow XD
I'm not that popular eheheh
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Bodies already look pretty real. Its just the face that makes it really non-realistic.
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i miss puket TT.TT never get to go down there everytime i go to thailand
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Omgz xD I'm so happy I added you
Pretty eyes o.o
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