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Published: 2015-02-02 16:31:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 1713; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 0
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A sunlit cobweb -
only the spider knows
how many times
it broke
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Comments: 31
excellently put! i love your writing style.
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Thank you ever so much for the kind words. <3
And sorry for the lateness of my reply.
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Beautiful. Once again, I love the added insight from the title. And I have to say, I actually like it as the short piece it is (as opposed to expanding it). It captures the deceptively fragile-looking resilience of the human spirit so well, just like this. Lovely, top to bottom.
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Thank you very much. 
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Well, if that doesn't prove that it's complete within itself, I don't know what does. Nothing good ever came of arm-wrestling the muse!!
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Oh that's so true, the muse is way too strong!
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Thank you very much, I'm honored you like it.
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This is so true and such a wonderful way to describe it.
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Thank you very much for the kind words.
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Thank you so much my dear
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You're most welcome. 
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Thank you very much!
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You're welcome!
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Excellent! I have a poem about a spider..would you like you read it?
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Thank you!
Sure, I'd love to read it 
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Welcome! Here it is..enjoy!
A Spider CursesA Spider Curses 9/3/01
A clear dew drop forms
on the spider's web.
It sparkles and grows and
spreads across the expansion.
The sun peeks through the
trees and a beam shoots
through the web displaying
the spectrum of colors,
the array that mesmerizes.
The spider crawls through
this intricate pattern
with ease and grace,
while it waits patiently for the
innocent insect to fall prey
to it's sticky trap.
The spider feels a tremor
as it's web falters and it
holds on to a single strand,
slamming into a tree.
It watches all the dew drops
scream to the ground.
His web disintegrates to
pieces and now he must start over.
If he could curse, he would,
at the stupid human who
just destroyed his home.
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Poche parole ma molto significative che rende bene il concetto. Aspetto l'ampliamento della storia su questo ragno che sono sicuro verrà molto bene.
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Grazie tantissime Roberto.
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Di niente Isabella è sempre un piacere
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Thank you so much
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You're welcome
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Thank you very much for the insightful comment Shehroze
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^^^I agree with you. AlwaysRainCheck should expand on this because, while it's already super great, it could be even better with more detail.
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You want more uh? 
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