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Aya-DNA [2018-02-11 04:34:35 +0000 UTC]
Hello there in come from
And the first thing that I wanna say is... HOW CREATIVE THIS PIECES IS, I mean I never imaginate how the mermaid and an angle can be one, and I never seen any pieces that combine two of it before, you are so imaginative on this art her wings are also so big and gorgeus, great art
also the color pick that you use this are so warm, I like how nice you combine orange color and yellow in here ^^
but idk why the white color kinda too lumious in here... cause, maybe it is "affternoon" time so it must be warm and not too shinny.. you can use white as the light but dont overdo it, white color are so strong if you wanted to use it as the lightning
and I read that you also have anatomy issues, actually that is also happend to me xD
but hey I found somehing that maybe can help you with perspective and proportion
If you have the luxury of time, leave your sketch for a few days and work on something else. Then come back to it, but instead of picking up a drawing tool, just sit back and compare your sketch to the source material. Take a few minutes to really soak it in. Once you have identified some areas you want to work on, take these steps:
Recall your process when you sketched those areas the first time. What were you thinking about? What techniques did you employ?
Visualize each area you want to work on, and exactly how you'll go about making the changes.
Then pick up your drawing tools and proceed.
Cause you will recognized what you usually missed if you leave your drawing for a sometime, like maybe your draw already done and you so proud with it but after a few hours / days, you will recognized which areas you typically miss, and developing a deep understanding of anatomy and motion will take your work to another level ^^
maybe just that what I can say, Im sorry for some broken english but I hope you understand, keep it up your great work
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AlwysbCreative In reply to Aya-DNA [2018-02-11 15:37:06 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for your helpful comment! I really appreciate it!
(and don't worry about your English, it's perfectly fine.)
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Gogogadgethat [2018-02-07 19:04:55 +0000 UTC]
I'm having a hard time coming up with accurate words to describe the sheer beauty of this piece.
You combined a sunset with a rainbow reflected over her oh-so-fragile wings.
Lady. Go for the museum art gallery and don't look back.
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AKFeral [2018-02-06 14:33:42 +0000 UTC]
It reminds me of a classical piece, almost. The use of vibrant colors makes it stand out, and it looks like you used pastels or oil paints. I can't place what it is, exactly.
The background landscape seems a little lopsided, though. For the future, some perspective reference lines would help.
I'm most impressed by your use of color. The sky literally seems to glow! That is something truly to be envied.
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AlwysbCreative In reply to AKFeral [2018-02-06 23:12:09 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! I am so glad you like it
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MsisBs [2018-02-06 01:58:17 +0000 UTC]
I like the fact that I can see under the water. Great content.
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AlwysbCreative In reply to MsisBs [2018-02-06 23:13:02 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much! That's very sweet of you to say!
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QORart [2018-01-27 19:47:53 +0000 UTC]
i'm from
wow,this is something very unique.I would begin by saying that I did not expect such a particular combination of elements so different from each other but so special at the same time.I would start by saying that everything makes the design so particularly warm and colorful,and she seems so happy but at the same time lonely in a world that does not know if it can accept it for what it is.I love so much the way you color it makes you feel the warmth of the sun's sky, warms your eyes and your heart, and those wings are so bright,
And above all the union of the colors of her wings make it even more luminous and pure as an actual angel.But there are small points in the design that you could easily improve,The only thing about the girl and that you just have to slightly adjust her proportions like the bust with respect to the head and legs,then there are the wings that seem slightly inclined in opposite directions to each other,then her eyes are slightly large for a view of her so far away,then its tail under water should not be seen so perfectly under water as a mirror at least that you did not want to represent with a luminous effect its magical particularity of its tail shining under water.Another little thing that does not convince me is the sky, seems to contradict itself (even if the effect is cool), it seems to be from as I see from a part night and the other day, if you want to make the effect that is coming the night and the day goes away you should just lighten the brightness near the night so you get a perfect effect.For the rest, continue like this and never be discouraged!!!
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AlwysbCreative In reply to QORart [2018-01-27 23:01:57 +0000 UTC]
You make great points, thank you so much for your comment!
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