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Aly06 — A broken friendship
Published: 2007-06-25 05:18:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 4761; Favourites: 95; Downloads: 10
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We are all going our separate ways andI will miss the closeness we all once had.
Had the keyword to the past.
How can one moment ruin a lifetime of trust?
Our bond is no longer held together by the fabric of time,
One snip from the scissors tore us all apart.
Can I tell you all I cry at night?
Because we aren’t together anymore?
I feel lost,
I always looked to each one of you for advice
but time changed, we changed.
One goes with the other
And I get caught in the middle.
I can’t stand it anymore
I cry for each and every one of us.
The memories of yesterday are always haunting my mind.
I want us to laugh together.
We act like children trapped in an adult appearance
It’s frustrating but can you see that?
NO…
Never had you all noticed I tried and still try
To keep us together.
When the world turned us down
We always had our own world to turn to.
I’m angry at all of you
But I can’t stop these tears from falling.
So my night will turn to dawn
And I will lose another night sleep.
Friendship will wither within time
And I will continue to fix the incomplete puzzle.
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Comments: 47
Friendship is not always pleasant. It is sometimes broken and messy. I would just tell them how you feel. If they're truly your friends, they will respond. If not, they won't and they aren't willing to do what it takes to be a true friend.
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Absolutely beautiful and painfully accurate.
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I've known this feeling for so long... However for me, when it came to the time for going our seperate ways because we were all heading off to college... We had an argument just before and unfortunately... We could never make up. I miss them so much... I'm hopeful you shall have better luck and handle things better than the way we did.
PS. I'm sorry that you had to read about my problems I'm sure you don't really want to know, I just felt your poem triggered this feeling of understanding in me.
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Thats exactly how I feel most of the time around my best friend it feels like were drifting apart whenever I try talking to her she acts like she forgot about everything we've been through
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❑ Taken
❑ Single
✔ Mentally dating a character that doesn't actually exist
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well i been bullie seen i was only very little in gr. k.g they treat me and my little brother and i have been a sad but also happy person i always care for a friend and help them too just am very scare to go to new school someday ........ and plz dont ll me it going be ok it kinda scares me ok?
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Had to look for broken friendship and found this... I know how it is. I tell a little playful joke and she has to get upset and has YO tell all her "cool" friends that I'm being mean so they also have sit there and tell me I'm a horrible person.
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This is exactly what is going on between my best friend and I 👍: 0 ⏩: 0
This is EXACTLY howi feel right now. This is well crafted, I especially like the number of lines in the stanzas change. Good poem.
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This is a very moving poem.
I'm stuck in a situation similar to this...
Its a horrible feeling...
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Its happening to me now too, but remember there is always a silver lining in every cloud...
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Awww such a touching poem. Basically the whole situation describes is what I'm going through right now
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Instant fave! Made me cry! Caught in the same situation!
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I just lost a friend today; not lost as in she died or anything, we just quit being friends.
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ThiS Poem is exactly what's happening in between me and my two best friends. They started dating, and I was left out. I tried keeping all of us together, but Iended up bing the third wheel. When one left the other, they'd both trash talk each other to me. Now I said stop it. One I never saw again and he other refuses to talk to me, writing stuff about suicide and junk. I'm left alone. Who's to blame?
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I can seriously relate to this. I was good friends with someone for a long time and now we're always at each other's necks...I'm sorry 
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i know exactly how u feel. my best friend, well once we went to middle school, she abbandoed me. luckily i had my other half, sister i never had, u no. but now, shes talking to me again. we exchanged cell numbers and are in a few of the same classes. its getting better, but i used to cry myself to sleep. but hang in there, it allways gets better, even ts not what u might expect
beautiful poem. really gets to the heart
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It reflects me in so many ways.
Physically , Emotionally , Situationally .
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I've pretty much lost a friendship. We were really close, and I thought we'd at least get through high school together.
But something happened, and we can't go back to how we were.
This story is the solide truth.
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It's not helping that I'm listening to Amazing Grace either
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that's happening to me right now, im trying to make it better but she thinks she's being the better person by ignoring me. it sucks!
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Yeah, happen to me right now.. Not fun and all I can do is cry..
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Me, it already happen to me years ago. Now time had healed my wounds but I still sometime look back at are old sweet friendship... But its the past and I wanted to tell you, if it end up like me, that the pain will disapear...but only with time...
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this poem relates me soooo WELL!!~ because those d*cks listened to her stupid ass leadership~~
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Omigod this totally describes what's happening to me in my life right now.... Except it's just one friend...
Thank you for making this and good luck with your friends I hope it works out for you
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I hope you know, this is one powerful poem. I'm in the same position right now, and it makes me feel like my world is splitting in half.
lulz that sounded a bit melodramatic.
Seriously though, this poem speaks to us all who watch our friends draw apart from each other. Kudos to you for writing this.
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damm I start to cry now >_>
I have the same thing now and I tried everything to keep the bond but it didn't work.
Thank you for writing this
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-cries-
Omg, you just wrote down what I just CAN'T explain in words..
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Thank you, I appreaciate the kind words.
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this was great..you did a great job at showing how you feel and the lose of friends and i've been going thru this same for most of the year and i exactly knows how this feels.
hope things get better for you
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It reminds me to my friendship that is broken
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awwww I love it. And can really relate to ur pain.
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aww i luv this its exactly how im feeling right now im glad im not the only one <3 good luck with everything though <3
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Omg, this poem is really beautiful.
When I'm reading it I have tears in my eyes. T_T
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Beautiful words.
They touched me right in the heart.
Just the thing to bring tears to your eyes and make you have a good cry when your friendship is on the verge of death.
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thank you for this writing, as im in the same situation now..
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No problem, it is great to help someone when they are in the same situation as yourself. I do hope things work out, hun.
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im not evein kidding i could have wrote that poem nd i woudt have wantd it any diff im crying my eyes out ask y this had to happen and this poem i cnt even believe it exsists i feel ur pain trust me i do
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Heh..feel better kay?
This fit's PERFECTELY to what I'm going thrugh now..just that it's between me and my bestfriend,not four ppl..heh..but I will fake another smile.
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Beautiful. End of. I hope they hear you and I hope you can make up all of you. Don't cry Alicia it will be ok.
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it's beautiful.
i hope you and your friends get back together.
hug good luck
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I totally understand what you're feeling here,
good use of words
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oh stop yer crying, its making me feel worse.... i feel terrible. I feel even more terrible that YOU're feeling terrible.
*sighs* ,.
... i dont really know what to say aly, except.. fuck it all. yeash..
Vent the negatives through art,, and for the rest of the world that refuses to listen... fuck em all.
ai ai...
^_^
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