Comments: 41
Elo1412 [2015-01-03 00:47:10 +0000 UTC]
I love the Character and her Background Story. Its sooooo cool and if you don't mind I would like to cover her Outfit ... Just if you don't mind !!!
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AlyssaFoxah In reply to Elo1412 [2015-01-03 01:20:01 +0000 UTC]
Cover? What do you mean?
Also, I'm glad you enjoy this old character of mine. She's kind of awful in my opinion xD But thanks, nonetheless.
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Elo1412 In reply to Elo1412 [2015-01-03 00:48:09 +0000 UTC]
Sorry for the late comment 😅
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Squid-kid-Sam [2013-09-01 14:43:12 +0000 UTC]
I think kid would have a fit seeing her like this.
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BlueRosesAnime [2013-05-12 01:38:22 +0000 UTC]
I love your character! She's very unique and different, and that's good (it's really hard to be unique with all the other OC's floating around). I love her back story andhow it sort of fits into her personality and helps create a sort of flaw bout her.
And don't listen the Mary Sue witch hunters. They just be jellin'.
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Snowhitewolf [2013-04-15 01:02:59 +0000 UTC]
I hate to break it to you sweetie but you can't be more than at least two races. Also your Sue killed my brain.
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AlyssaFoxah In reply to Snowhitewolf [2013-04-15 03:25:04 +0000 UTC]
This is an old version of the character, her story is the same, but her make-up has changed a bit. You would do better to judge the newer version of the character.
Other than the ridiculous number of races she has, she really isn't a sue. She's quite a well thought out character. I put so many different races because of the creatures that her mother and father were, but not all of them really applied to her. It's just the combination that she had to have.
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Snowhitewolf In reply to AlyssaFoxah [2013-04-15 04:19:19 +0000 UTC]
You seriously want me to go bit by bit as to why your character is a Sue. Challenge accepted.
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AlyssaFoxah In reply to Snowhitewolf [2013-04-15 04:26:30 +0000 UTC]
? It's not really a challenge...this is an old character, so she probably needs some improving anyway.
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Snowhitewolf In reply to AlyssaFoxah [2013-04-15 05:08:26 +0000 UTC]
I'm doing it anyway.
Also, for the love of all that is holy, put in a personality blurb. And not just three sentences, a detailed paragraph.
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AlyssaFoxah In reply to Snowhitewolf [2013-04-16 10:18:06 +0000 UTC]
Ah, forgot to do that when I replied to your note.
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xxMadameDerpxx [2013-04-14 10:18:45 +0000 UTC]
Please tell me this is a troll sue. Please.
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AlyssaFoxah In reply to xxMadameDerpxx [2013-04-14 22:03:33 +0000 UTC]
Ehy would you think that? You don't have to be rude about it either.
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xxMadameDerpxx In reply to AlyssaFoxah [2013-04-14 23:48:01 +0000 UTC]
There are no vampires in Soul Eater. Nor Royalty of Goth. Whatever the hell that is. And if she's part witch wouldn't she have animal themed magic?
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AlyssaFoxah In reply to xxMadameDerpxx [2013-04-15 03:34:09 +0000 UTC]
When I make characters, I don't always go 100% canon, but I try to stay practical (some people REALLY hate that...). To be honest, it wouldn't be that surprising if vampires existed in the Soul Eater world, and that's why I felt comfortable adding that in. It would be plausible.
This is the older version of the character. I didn't really bother saying it, but it only says she's part witch because her mother was a witch. She actually didn't inherit those genetics, but her sister did. I probably should've specified that XD
The whole 'Goth' thing is part of her story. It's not like she's treated like royalty or anything, it's just a title from the place she grew up in. I can't remember if back when I wrote that whether or not I specified that her father is a different kind of reaper that I came up with, but that's the case. The word 'Goth' really is just being used to describe that her father was a 'shadow reaper'. Instead of having him be called 'Lord Shadow' (which sounds weird), I went with 'Lord Goth', making reference to the darkness.
Hope that explains a little bit.
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AlyssaFoxah In reply to Ask-Tith [2013-01-02 01:18:53 +0000 UTC]
I disagree, I think it's a pretty unique and creative storyline, but we are all entitled to our opinions.
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Ask-Tith In reply to AlyssaFoxah [2013-01-02 01:19:33 +0000 UTC]
I mean all the things she is...........
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AlyssaFoxah In reply to Ask-Tith [2013-01-02 01:23:35 +0000 UTC]
OHHHHHHHHH yes well there are reasons for it. The meister one is a bit of a stretch, but the others make sense in her story.
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SceneViolinst [2012-11-22 15:35:21 +0000 UTC]
Yep I'm changing my OCs (xD) Kiki and Caio >.< God..Stupid names really.
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Lilliozwest [2012-06-15 01:22:39 +0000 UTC]
Is it pronounced got-hate or goth-ate?
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Chabeli05 [2012-05-03 03:59:48 +0000 UTC]
WOW NICE OC SHE LOOKS REALLY TOUGH I LIKE IT ^^
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XxSceneyBabayxX [2012-02-18 07:04:16 +0000 UTC]
"Weapon/Vampire/Witch/Reaper"?
lolwut?
But besides the multitude of races this girl seems to be it was a good story.
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AlyssaFoxah In reply to XxSceneyBabayxX [2012-02-19 10:13:54 +0000 UTC]
lol her dad was a vampire and her mother a witch and the curse gave her the properties of a reaper and she has the blood of a human weapon from her grandparents on her fathers side of the family lolz
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KrazieKat2112 [2011-10-22 05:44:22 +0000 UTC]
This is so good =0 =0 =0 I love it please continue
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AlyssaFoxah In reply to KrazieKat2112 [2011-10-22 15:21:41 +0000 UTC]
Wow! That makes me happy :3 If you want, I can write even more story to go along with other illustrations
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KrazieKat2112 In reply to AlyssaFoxah [2011-10-22 19:07:28 +0000 UTC]
^^ Yeah if its not to much truoble for you. I really enjoyed it ^^
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arekusandaa-neko [2011-09-23 15:53:26 +0000 UTC]
this is really good!
I am excited to read more!
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AlyssaFoxah In reply to arekusandaa-neko [2011-09-23 21:08:47 +0000 UTC]
Really? You think I should write down the continuation of the story? I was just doing that so people wouldn't take one glance at it and be like "pfft what a rip off OC based off death the kid!!" if you want, i can write more and post it.
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