Comments: 38
Cakesalie [2012-02-27 16:09:00 +0000 UTC]
Love the pic and the story aswell
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Sad-Reaper [2012-02-25 19:33:28 +0000 UTC]
...aaand CUT!
wow... that was... can I call it "beautiful"? Well, I can definitely call this scene "great"!
I can't wait to read your fanfic! I'm sure it's gonna be legen-... wait for it...
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Amadalia In reply to Sad-Reaper [2012-02-27 10:22:07 +0000 UTC]
I wrote it before I left, I was in a bit of a hurry. I really could have done better
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Sad-Reaper In reply to Amadalia [2012-02-27 11:34:54 +0000 UTC]
well, they say that artist is never happy with his/her work...
It really is good, but if you say that you can do better, then I really can't wait to read it!
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Amadalia In reply to Sad-Reaper [2012-02-27 11:40:26 +0000 UTC]
I didn't do many details, I just wrote it and left haha.
The first few chapters of the fanfic will be Ama telling the story up to a point then it will be current
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sun--shark [2012-02-25 03:33:00 +0000 UTC]
Can't wait for the fic!
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Amadalia In reply to sun--shark [2012-02-27 10:22:27 +0000 UTC]
well I did write this in a bit of a hurry
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Amadalia In reply to MasuyoAraki [2012-02-27 10:22:57 +0000 UTC]
meh.. I can do better. I wrote this before I left. I never even spell checked it haha
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MasuyoAraki In reply to Amadalia [2012-02-28 01:13:13 +0000 UTC]
Lol because spell checking takes too long.
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Merc-Wit-da-Mouth [2012-02-24 23:17:17 +0000 UTC]
Wow just wow, this has my mouth watering in anticipation for your fanfic.
Andrew: That's not healthy y'know.
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Merc-Wit-da-Mouth In reply to Amadalia [2012-02-27 11:57:43 +0000 UTC]
Maybe just a little bit, but in all seriousness it's good and I can't wait for the fanfic.
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EvyCrystal [2012-02-24 22:53:26 +0000 UTC]
very good ama love <3 <3
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Amadalia In reply to EvyCrystal [2012-02-27 10:23:18 +0000 UTC]
aww thanks pudding
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Amadalia In reply to TheBlazeKagayaku [2012-02-27 10:23:51 +0000 UTC]
pifft, you are being FAR to nice. I wrote this in a hurry. I know I can do far better. But thank you Blaze
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Amadalia In reply to hollowtiger [2012-02-27 10:24:11 +0000 UTC]
indeed, I can do better
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hollowtiger In reply to Amadalia [2012-02-27 21:36:49 +0000 UTC]
looking forward to it ^^
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IndioBlack619 [2012-02-24 11:36:40 +0000 UTC]
BEAUTIFUL job
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Amadalia In reply to Blackwind211 [2012-02-27 10:24:37 +0000 UTC]
oh this is just a touch of her story
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ChikaraRyoku [2012-02-24 10:04:13 +0000 UTC]
pretty
Ama, that looks great
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Amadalia In reply to ChikaraRyoku [2012-02-24 10:07:55 +0000 UTC]
I'm still unsure about my writing
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ChikaraRyoku In reply to Amadalia [2012-02-24 11:41:02 +0000 UTC]
well, i like the short story
there are a few writing mistakes, but they can be easily read over
(load should be loud)
pretty picture and good story
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Amadalia In reply to MrDak3000 [2012-02-24 09:54:08 +0000 UTC]
I'm uneasy about my writing. I feel I need more detail
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MrDak3000 In reply to Amadalia [2012-02-24 10:02:35 +0000 UTC]
i'll let ya know okay?
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Amadalia In reply to MrDak3000 [2012-02-24 10:08:07 +0000 UTC]
it's all good dear
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