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Amai--Kiss — +French Maids+
Published: 2012-02-24 13:00:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 3708; Favourites: 184; Downloads: 54
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YESH! I FINISHED IT.I know there are some flaws here and there but overall I still like it. ;o; The background was pain, but I think I did well for my first try.
Aki and Art by
Alice and Ameko by
Marble texture is standard to GIMP
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Comments: 38
Hello hello again ~ (: Here's yet another critique from #CritiCentrum !
Negatives
- Compared to the girls the steps of the stair are really high, one would have to lift the knees to the waist to climb it
- Are the walls towards the stairs round, or are they pillars? In case they aren't, then the walls shouldn't be drawn like that, but as a straigt line going towards the stairs.
- Despite the perspective the pattern on the floor stays the same size everywhere, keep in mind these should also get smaller the more far away.
- When seen from this point to up-side of the steps (the side on which you step) should be smaller. Seen from this , you almost can't see the up-side so they should be drawn some more narrow 
- The shades on the ground says the light source is coming from before the girls, yet the shades on Aki's legs says it comes from the left. The shade on her legs should be on both sides of it, since the light lits only the front.
Positives
- I like how their designs are all the same but they have different ribbon and stocking colors ^^
- Also great how you used textures, and how you actually dared to draw a background! A lot of people are too afraid then can't draw it and they never give an attempt to do so.
Now it may seem like you did a lot wrong, but drawing backgrounds like these is really hard and it's way easier to pick out the errors than to draw it correct, so don't worry 
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love love love the background! You did a great job for your first try, i think the shadows are a nice touch
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.....i thought alice's boobs were bigger than aki's?
The background actually came out rather nicely - I think you should draw them more often.
Very cute outfit designs, it looks great!
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Oeh, achtergrond! 
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Bedankt!
Ik had nog nooit eerder textures gebruikt en ik weet ook niet hoe ik ze moet toevoegen op SAI. 
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Heb je geen lagen in sai? Gewoon in een transparante laag er over heen gooien
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This is so adorable and moe~
And IC Yoru & OOC Haru approves!!! lol
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Thank you. ;o;
Ohohoho e u e Of course they do~
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This is so beautiful~And the background is great! <3
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Aaaw wat lief! Ook heel mooi gedaan
Het is heel goedd gedaan voor je eerste achtergrond, maar alleen zijn de traptreden nogal groot om te beklimmen... Het zou beter zijn als je een paar perspectief tutorials doorleest ^_^
Maar je characters zijn zoals altijd JOUW stijl en dus heel lief!
More!! ~
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French maids...
I'm french xDD
Very very very nice art, you did a very good job here
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I agree. ;o;
I wanna cuddle her.
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yesssssss
--It's very nice, by the way I can't say much else cuz uhm... I'm about to take my last mid-term >_____>
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this is a really awesone first attempt!!! great job amai~
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good work and the dress, hair and eyes
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Asdfghjkjhgf this is so cute.
..And this makes me wanna draw Hannah as a french maid. ene
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- This is REALLY good! I lovveee the cute little outfits and that background-
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