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- Day 30: Fear -
239 word count

Niv stayed long enough to apologize and reconnect with Scamper – they walked along their boundaries together, making plans to go exploring – but then she felt a nagging urge and, with a brief explanation to Scamper, she teleported.

The floodwaters had left damage but had now receded back to the rivers. Niv saw no sign of the reindeer-like esk, the one that had been transformed from a deer. What had happened to the doe’s fawns? Had they met a terrible fate within Seventh’s range or had they gone peacefully into the afterlife?

Niv was splashing through the river when the frost climbed across the surface and up one of her forelegs. She let loose a mental eep! and leapt away from the spreading frost. The half-spin of the leap revealed that Niv had put herself into Seventh’s path.

Now Niv heard the jarring noise emitted by this Wanderer and though she was not prepared for the psychic anguish she handled it relatively well. After all, she was no stranger to these pains. Individuals were harshest on themselves, were they not?

Through all of it Niv still felt fear. Even if she could weather the mental pain this was a Wanderer of great persuasion and power. The last thing Niv wanted was its attention – which it seemed she might get as the Wanderer slowed.

Niv cowered.

Just as Seventh’s head tilted downward as though to stare down at her, Niv teleported.



- TO BE CONTINUED -


I am so creeped out by Seventh *shudders*
For the record, Niv isn't seeking Seventh out (she's creeped out by it too) so these two encounters to date are by chance.

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featured with Niv

VII Seventh

GP Breakdown (1454):
Base Score: 4 GP (Shaded Illustration)
+2 GP (Full Body)
+6 GP (Full/Scenic Background)
+2 GP (Writing: 239 words)
Total GP per submission: 14

AP Breakdown:
Base Score: 10 AP (Shaded Illustration)
+5 AP (Full Body)
+20 AP (Full/Scenic Background)
+5 AP (Personal Work Bonus)
+20 AP (NPC Bonus)
+4 AP (Writing: 239 words)
Total AP per submission: 64



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1454 Niv belongs to AmaranthineRain  

VII Seventh belongs to ThoseWhoWentMissing  
art © AmaranthineRain  aka Kiri Rabina Ramdeo
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Comments: 10

TokoQueen [2018-11-21 04:11:35 +0000 UTC]

Wow, the Seventh is scary! You did a great job with this illustration! Love the eerie story as well.

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AmaranthineRain In reply to TokoQueen [2018-11-21 17:18:36 +0000 UTC]

Seventh creeps me out x__x Thank you! I'm trying to expand the types of stories I write with these too. More practice!

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TokoQueen In reply to AmaranthineRain [2018-11-25 14:45:04 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, he is kind of spooky. I wouldn't want to run into him. LOL

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VaalbaraCreeps [2018-11-01 15:40:59 +0000 UTC]

such an eerie piece!! amazing work!!

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AmaranthineRain In reply to VaalbaraCreeps [2018-11-02 13:36:47 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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Archalyte [2018-11-01 11:30:15 +0000 UTC]

You really nailed the feeling of fear in this piece Niv has so much GP i'm jealous ;')

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AmaranthineRain In reply to Archalyte [2018-11-01 13:56:41 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! She's terrified of Seventh xD
Esktober helped, and I promised myself that when I got into esk that for every illustration there would be a story because I was done with frivolous ARPG art and needed some kind of purpose. That really helps build up the GP She'll be back to visit Nerou!

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Archalyte In reply to AmaranthineRain [2018-11-01 14:14:24 +0000 UTC]

yayy ^-^

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runeowl [2018-11-01 01:01:46 +0000 UTC]

The imagery of the esk cowering before Seventh in the dark is really dramatic ... very nice.

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AmaranthineRain In reply to runeowl [2018-11-01 01:35:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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