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Published: 2015-09-02 01:30:26 +0000 UTC; Views: 1354; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 2
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Finally got page one out! I will most likely come back and color this (mostly because I love how it turned out) but right now I'm feeling sick and have a massive headache @.@Anyways my first (of many) "victims" is ! Zero has gone from normal guy to cute little female umbreon! Who's next to be changed? What will they become? Be sure to look out for page two!!!
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The comics flaws:
1. Tiny frames are floating in empty space. You should better make a comics without gaps between frames.
2. TF/TG. I, personally, hate it. It's tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php… cliche. Either way, you have to SHOW it. Of course, not showing genitals but, for example, by calling a victim: "come here, girl".
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Thanks for the advice, I can definitely see where you're coming from. I do need to work on my framing a bit- and show some aspects a bit better. Thanks for the criticism!
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X3 there's no escape!
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Im glad you do!
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I can't wait to see what comes next!
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^_^ in one of the pages, the requester worked out with me that we'd both tf!
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And of course your request is coming up
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I can't wait to see what you do with me :3 almost wish I had the foresight to tf you too
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Very fun stuff. It's gonna be great!
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