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AmbientMoon — Finnex

Published: 2007-08-23 00:36:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 290; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 4
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Description Well this is my own original character her name is Finnex (Phoenix). She's bad ass and she is immortal since she is born again.
~In my story, Finnex and this man by the name of Lloyd fall in love. He meets her when he finds out that he has mysical powers. He has premonitions. She is his guru and teaches him how to control his powers and use them for good. But when he has a premonition about Finnex dying, he tries to save her. In the end, she dies and he is heart broken but from her ashes she rises again.
- love, action, violence, sex, and romance are the key themes that take place in my story.
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Comments: 6

DemonicDJkitty [2007-08-23 16:35:09 +0000 UTC]

koolios!! omg this is so good! u really have improved!!! r u gonna write this story? cuz i wanna read it!

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AmbientMoon In reply to DemonicDJkitty [2007-08-23 18:06:29 +0000 UTC]

TY!! umm i really dont kno i'll try if i do ur the first one !! believe me!!

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DemonicDJkitty In reply to AmbientMoon [2007-08-23 18:07:35 +0000 UTC]

oOo ok really? lol

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AmbientMoon In reply to DemonicDJkitty [2007-08-23 21:50:24 +0000 UTC]

lol really!!

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DriRose [2007-08-23 01:07:08 +0000 UTC]

Looks great, only she does look a little too thin. I love the way you drew the gun. Really detailed! It also sounds like a very interesting story.

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AmbientMoon In reply to DriRose [2007-08-23 01:34:09 +0000 UTC]

ty well shes thin i guess cuz she about over 100 yrs old i donno LOL yea the gun took more time then she did i never really drew weapons b4 thanx lot ^-^

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