Comments: 35
xIf-This-Is-Lovex [2012-01-20 03:09:56 +0000 UTC]
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I like this. But there are some things that could be better about it.
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1. Lionblaze's face is very round. Cat's faces are more oval-ly like so: [link]
2. Also, both of them have...odd shoulders. The way their shoulders connect to their body isn't normal, this is how a cat's shoulder's should look: [link]
3.Lionblaze's body is way to wide. I know that he's a muscular, large cat, but that does look very...natural. Look at the picture in number 2 again.
4. Lionblaze's tail shouldn't look like that. If you want it to be wrapped around his paws, it should look like so: [link]
5. Cat's ears aren't that pointed, there more rounded , like the picture in 1.
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1. The shading looks fantastic. You can really tell where the light is coming from.
2.The background is amazing! It's extremely realistic, and I like how it's a background, not the whole picture.
3.The mist in the front is also very good. It's obvious what it is, yet it doesn't take up the whole foreground.
4. The blurring technique you used for Squirrelflight's paw is excellent, as well as the markings on Lionblaze.
Overall, this is a very nice piece, just some incorrect anatomy.
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xIf-This-Is-Lovex In reply to Amerikat [2012-01-20 03:16:17 +0000 UTC]
Your so very welcome! I did for a long time too, I think everyone does.
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Ask0Firestar [2014-02-01 13:34:39 +0000 UTC]
O.0 Save me!!!
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animechick344034 [2013-07-21 16:35:39 +0000 UTC]
FINALLY~ No more grudges being held.
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shadamy20 [2012-03-26 23:22:35 +0000 UTC]
Nice
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Electric-Claw [2012-01-27 01:44:45 +0000 UTC]
The Forgotten Warrior... I've got to find that!
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foxsmith2 [2012-01-21 03:15:50 +0000 UTC]
Awesome job!
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kittyluv8 [2012-01-20 23:52:54 +0000 UTC]
You shouldn't hate it, it's great! You even drew the little details, like Lionblaze clawing the dirt <3
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kittyluv8 In reply to Amerikat [2012-01-21 02:47:45 +0000 UTC]
Well, I still think it's pretty good, even if you don't X3
Better anatomy than I could do, honestly. I've barely got the head down.
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Amerikat In reply to JuliPwnsAll [2012-01-21 02:43:17 +0000 UTC]
haha yeah, I loved it xD
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Hypercatzz [2012-01-20 02:43:30 +0000 UTC]
i actually just read that part today :3 i was so happy, now only if squirrel and bramble get back together
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NekoMangaka [2012-01-20 02:39:38 +0000 UTC]
i love the picture!
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Amerikat In reply to neutralchao59 [2012-01-20 02:37:50 +0000 UTC]
ahaha thank you, but I honestly think it's terrible xDDD *dies*
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xXBrightyXx [2012-01-20 02:31:41 +0000 UTC]
Poor Lionblaze.. I'm only on Sunrise xDD
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Amerikat In reply to xXBrightyXx [2012-01-20 02:37:35 +0000 UTC]
oh goodness I'm sorry if I spoiled anything xD
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Tehmaster31 [2012-01-20 02:31:13 +0000 UTC]
...first fave?
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