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Published: 2009-02-01 22:06:36 +0000 UTC; Views: 3947; Favourites: 197; Downloads: 35
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Description he told me:

when i think of falling,
i think of comets and
insomnia and midnight
rushes of emotions and
breaking down just to feel

something

again. he told me
when i think of falling,
i think of you.

but this is okay, because
falling things cannot be
stopped, and

.

you have always been the most
beautiful in a quiet way, like how
the moon outshines the sun, and you
have dreams like uncut glass,
waiting to be shaped or dropped or
maybe both and

you promise you won't let me
break

but i think, i think that maybe

.

i already have and you can't
undo the past and there's no point
in trying and

.

you are the kind of dream
i never want
to wake up from.
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Comments: 148

urban-lingo [2010-10-01 09:57:15 +0000 UTC]

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Koori-Sempai [2010-07-17 21:52:53 +0000 UTC]

I love this.
I too shoot the comets away from me.
I don't wanna get my heart crushed by them.

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LoveMusic210 [2010-01-08 04:00:41 +0000 UTC]

Wow, that was great. Terrific work!

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Ro-B0-Jo [2009-03-18 09:46:46 +0000 UTC]

All of your stories are so perfect and amazing I shall watch you c:

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Amertie In reply to Ro-B0-Jo [2009-03-18 15:05:03 +0000 UTC]

aw, thanks. =]
and thank you for the watch.

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xxShadowexx [2009-02-27 00:19:28 +0000 UTC]

ugh, way too perfect.

I'm watching you.

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Amertie In reply to xxShadowexx [2009-02-28 02:17:23 +0000 UTC]

aww, thank you.

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xxShadowexx In reply to Amertie [2009-02-28 20:10:07 +0000 UTC]

welcome. ^^

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beyondweird [2009-02-19 09:59:07 +0000 UTC]

I love this, especially "have dreams like uncut glass,
waiting to be shaped or dropped or
maybe both and"

I'm thinking I need to add you to my watch...

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Amertie In reply to beyondweird [2009-02-19 23:04:26 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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DevinJamie [2009-02-13 17:07:59 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes reality seems more like a dream and dreams seem more like reality. Sometimes that thing that you feel is just a dream, is really real. Sometimes you just need a little faith.

This is beautiful and makes me very happy.

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Amertie In reply to DevinJamie [2009-02-14 15:50:27 +0000 UTC]

i can't find my faith, though.
should i put up a missing sign?

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DevinJamie In reply to Amertie [2009-02-17 01:32:04 +0000 UTC]

With a big hug for a reward.

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Amertie In reply to DevinJamie [2009-02-22 00:33:33 +0000 UTC]

yes.
think anyone would find it?

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Devilie [2009-02-08 17:27:10 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you submited because I really like it. Very good

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Amertie In reply to Devilie [2009-02-08 17:56:52 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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SaiaraAuthorGirl [2009-02-06 23:41:58 +0000 UTC]

This is very pretty.

This reminds me of the song "I Hate Everything About You" by Three Days Grace.

I'll thank [link] .

- IxKaiTheFireflyRiotxI

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Amertie In reply to SaiaraAuthorGirl [2009-02-07 02:17:16 +0000 UTC]

i really love that song.

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SaiaraAuthorGirl In reply to Amertie [2009-02-07 23:59:59 +0000 UTC]

YAY!

THREE DAYS GRACE RULES!

- IxKaiTheFireflyRiotxI

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Amertie In reply to SaiaraAuthorGirl [2009-02-08 00:03:23 +0000 UTC]

agreed. =]

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SaiaraAuthorGirl In reply to Amertie [2009-02-08 00:05:01 +0000 UTC]



- IxKaiTheFireflyRiotxI

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LoveInfernal [2009-02-06 09:27:40 +0000 UTC]

i loooove this! so glad your friend made you post it

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Amertie In reply to LoveInfernal [2009-02-07 02:09:35 +0000 UTC]

thanks.

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LoveInfernal In reply to Amertie [2009-02-25 03:55:57 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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catt-gal-2006 [2009-02-06 08:22:40 +0000 UTC]

"you are the kind of dream
i never want
to wake up from."

absolutely love that line...~<3

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Amertie In reply to catt-gal-2006 [2009-02-07 02:08:43 +0000 UTC]

thank you.

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catt-gal-2006 In reply to Amertie [2009-02-07 07:45:33 +0000 UTC]

your welcome~

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SubstituteSadist [2009-02-06 04:59:29 +0000 UTC]

i'm definitely glad you submitted this. ^^

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Amertie In reply to SubstituteSadist [2009-02-07 02:05:04 +0000 UTC]

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FL4L [2009-02-05 03:42:47 +0000 UTC]

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 4 her aaaand... 4 u!

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Amertie In reply to FL4L [2009-02-05 23:04:58 +0000 UTC]

from both of us. =]

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FL4L In reply to Amertie [2009-03-02 04:01:44 +0000 UTC]

ha ha thank you good job you two

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EternalFreedom [2009-02-03 08:16:14 +0000 UTC]

i am so happy you submitted this. <3

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Amertie In reply to EternalFreedom [2009-02-05 03:00:18 +0000 UTC]

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TheCoalMineCanary [2009-02-03 03:39:54 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful.
You are a truly talented artist. I hope you know that and never forget it.

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Amertie In reply to TheCoalMineCanary [2009-02-05 02:59:46 +0000 UTC]

thank you.
[i don't. but.
it's okay. ]

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TheCoalMineCanary In reply to Amertie [2009-02-08 02:07:30 +0000 UTC]

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Sielte [2009-02-03 03:11:34 +0000 UTC]

for you.

BRB I'll go skip to her page and hug her too.

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Amertie In reply to Sielte [2009-02-05 02:59:28 +0000 UTC]



and thank you for hugging her!
she deserves many hugs.

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ohsostarryeyed [2009-02-03 00:47:38 +0000 UTC]

glad you did submit this
"you are the kind of dream
i never want
to wake up from."

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Amertie In reply to ohsostarryeyed [2009-02-05 02:58:36 +0000 UTC]

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sbroxmysxo18 [2009-02-03 00:37:38 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could say something that would mean something.

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Amertie In reply to sbroxmysxo18 [2009-02-05 02:58:32 +0000 UTC]

but that does mean something.

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sbroxmysxo18 In reply to Amertie [2009-02-05 20:42:01 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. I actually then proceeded to write a poem with that line...so your poem inspired me to write a response that inspired me to write a poem so thank you again

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xxcrashgirlxx [2009-02-02 22:11:06 +0000 UTC]

Falling things cannot be stopped.
Neither can flying things or burning things
or desirehungerwonderlove things.
This is good, yes?

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Amertie In reply to xxcrashgirlxx [2009-02-05 02:57:06 +0000 UTC]

i think so.
still trying to decide.

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KayOfKhaos [2009-02-02 20:58:10 +0000 UTC]

You have the most interesting line structure and unique rhythm. I love it. Great word choice and imagery. It pretty much rocks.

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Amertie In reply to KayOfKhaos [2009-02-05 02:56:47 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much.

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japoemka [2009-02-02 19:32:35 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing... Makes my almos cry
I'm going to watch you, dear, cause you're poetry is so precious...

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Amertie In reply to japoemka [2009-02-05 02:56:30 +0000 UTC]


and thank you for the watch.

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