Comments: 148
Koori-Sempai [2010-07-17 21:52:53 +0000 UTC]
I love this.
I too shoot the comets away from me.
I don't wanna get my heart crushed by them.
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LoveMusic210 [2010-01-08 04:00:41 +0000 UTC]
Wow, that was great. Terrific work!
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beyondweird [2009-02-19 09:59:07 +0000 UTC]
I love this, especially "have dreams like uncut glass,
waiting to be shaped or dropped or
maybe both and"
I'm thinking I need to add you to my watch...
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DevinJamie [2009-02-13 17:07:59 +0000 UTC]
Sometimes reality seems more like a dream and dreams seem more like reality. Sometimes that thing that you feel is just a dream, is really real. Sometimes you just need a little faith.
This is beautiful and makes me very happy.
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Amertie In reply to DevinJamie [2009-02-14 15:50:27 +0000 UTC]
i can't find my faith, though.
should i put up a missing sign?
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DevinJamie In reply to Amertie [2009-02-17 01:32:04 +0000 UTC]
With a big hug for a reward.
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Amertie In reply to DevinJamie [2009-02-22 00:33:33 +0000 UTC]
yes.
think anyone would find it?
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Amertie In reply to Devilie [2009-02-08 17:56:52 +0000 UTC]
thank you.
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catt-gal-2006 [2009-02-06 08:22:40 +0000 UTC]
"you are the kind of dream
i never want
to wake up from."
absolutely love that line...~<3
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SubstituteSadist [2009-02-06 04:59:29 +0000 UTC]
i'm definitely glad you submitted this. ^^
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FL4L In reply to Amertie [2009-03-02 04:01:44 +0000 UTC]
ha ha thank you good job you two
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EternalFreedom [2009-02-03 08:16:14 +0000 UTC]
i am so happy you submitted this. <3
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sbroxmysxo18 [2009-02-03 00:37:38 +0000 UTC]
I wish I could say something that would mean something.
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Amertie In reply to sbroxmysxo18 [2009-02-05 02:58:32 +0000 UTC]
but that does mean something.
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sbroxmysxo18 In reply to Amertie [2009-02-05 20:42:01 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I actually then proceeded to write a poem with that line...so your poem inspired me to write a response that inspired me to write a poem so thank you again
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KayOfKhaos [2009-02-02 20:58:10 +0000 UTC]
You have the most interesting line structure and unique rhythm. I love it. Great word choice and imagery. It pretty much rocks.
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