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Eye-of-Tichodroma [2020-01-31 15:04:51 +0000 UTC]
Hi! I'm here from
What I like most about this picture is the colour scheme. The gold and shining blue form lovely highlights before the grey-black background and the woman's black and white colour scheme. The colours give this drawing an aesthetic and "noble" air. You draw the metallic texture of the clothing adornments especially well, they look gorgeous. Also, I love how well you've drawn the character's skin! The texture, the details, the lighting, it looks just like real skin! You're clearly good at drawing the effects of light, since both the sharp reflection on metal and the softer look of light on skin is so well done. I'm not sure there should be a reflection on the arm ring on her left upper arm though, since the light seems to come from the left and her body would be in the way of the light.
I would echo what other commenters have already said: the woman's proportions are a bit off. Her hips are unrealistically wide and her upper arms are too thin and look a bit "noodly". I'm also not sure her bra would stay up like that without straps. It doesn't look like a sports bra that would fit very tightly or like it has elastic bands. On the contrary, the metallic adornments would weigh the bra down so it would probably need some kind of shoulder straps to stay in place.
Regarding the background, I like the muted colours, which don't distract from the character who's the focus of the picture. However, the blur on the left looks like a motion blur to me and yet there's no similar blur on the right, which I find a little confusing. Also, the background is dominated by multiple triangles, and triangles generally make a picture look dynamic, especially combined with the motion blur I mentioned. Yet the woman in the foreground is firmly grounded and stands still. Thus I'd use a more calm looking background for her to emphasize the impression of quiet, magical power that she gives off.
To sum up, you do a very good job with the colours and textures and the character looks both beautiful and powerful. What could use work is the proportions and the relationship between foreground and background, which seem to send conflicting messages.
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MizzlilFox [2020-01-16 15:39:27 +0000 UTC]
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ci0 [2020-01-16 04:07:02 +0000 UTC]
Constructive comment
I always liked photorealistic renders and this one caught my attention. Is a great one but there are pros and cons that i would like to adress.
One pro is the lighting that is spot-on, it illuminates the model very well, adding shadows to make her toned body more detailed, especially in the abs region. Yhe depiction of the model is reallly realistic, but the hip to waist ratio is a bot off, the hips are a bit wider than it should be. She needs to be "trimmed" a bit.
I know the background needs to be blurry in order to highlight the dominant part, in this case the model you depicted, but it too blurry in this case i cannot distinguish anything. It should be less blurry. Those purple littel orbs add a nice touch, but i would hae concentrated them around her open palm, to give them a reason to exist (if she can generate these orbs).
Overall, is a very nice image, i cannot distinguish if is a painting or a render, maybe can you clarify that for me?
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AMTEPRA In reply to ci0 [2020-01-16 04:30:49 +0000 UTC]
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AMTEPRA In reply to ci0 [2020-01-16 10:17:07 +0000 UTC]
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Burke23 In reply to AMTEPRA [2020-01-15 02:28:27 +0000 UTC]
ye
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Hispanoamericano2000 [2020-01-14 01:24:28 +0000 UTC]
Great work of art!
Excellent work with anatomy and body proportions, I admit they are outstanding.
I also find it fantastic how you colored the piece, especially the body.
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AikaWolfsoul [2020-01-11 19:21:50 +0000 UTC]
That's stunning! Beautiful anatomy and proportions, the way you painted her skin is marvelous! wonderful job <3
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amptek [2020-01-11 06:55:13 +0000 UTC]
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AMTEPRA In reply to amptek [2020-01-11 13:45:18 +0000 UTC]
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warrior31992 [2020-01-11 01:50:28 +0000 UTC]
Stunningly Beautiful
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