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AmukaUroy — Yondaime Doujinshi 00
Published: 2009-10-29 12:38:46 +0000 UTC; Views: 18410; Favourites: 272; Downloads: 0
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Well, I DID say I would start uploading these on Friday, but since I only had to turn in the first page, and not the cover...Might as well, plus, I'm excited for this one!
NEW PAGES WILL BE UPLOADED DAILY UNTIL FINISHED!
Ah, the cover? I made it soooooooooo vague, that you don't know what's going down! >:]
Ha, I put "critique meh" just cuz this is my first deviation with a subscription!
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The colors you have chosen for the cover are perfect because it really brings the main characters out. Naruto looks adorable and Mianto looks like a father who is kind, understanding, and gentle. Judging by their expressions this will be a fun and interesting to read at any age.
Anyone can really relate to the father-and-son bond you created. Minato's calm expression and Naruto's stubborn attitude speaks volumes.
And, since I have read your doujinshi, I can honestly say the cover does not disappoint the actual main focus in this story. It stays straight to the main characters and bond they create throughout the story.
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This cover looks absolutely fantastic and rather adorable. There is definitely a lot of similarity between father and son here lol. I love Naruto's pose. It's like he's trying to be all bad ass in front of his dad. Minato almost like he's trying not to laugh at the cute pose too.
Design wise, you have everything right. I love the coloring you did as well. The eyes of father and son are almost gem like, which really is something I enjoy a great deal.
Tying his Daddy's coat around his neck, I love it! Very nice touch here. Great job!
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I've read this several times, and I can't help but want to cry at the end. Great job on this Yoru!
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Okay it can't get any cuter than little Naruto using Minato's coat as a cape... while he's wearing it! This is adorable! -squeals-
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XD awwwww.... dont read the ending, it'll be [not] cute!
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Oh no! Now i have to read the end hah.
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I love Naruto's little tough guy face...and the fact that he tied on his dad's jacket as a cape XD
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The cover is so cute little Naruto with his daddy ^__^ Great work.
Design was great the color really suits it. Over all it's very well done again great job!!
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WOW Can't wait for it!! Hope Sasuke will have an appearance! xD
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...lol, not to get your hopes up, but he doesnt
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AWWW HAHA No worries!XD I still can't wait!!
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Yay! Hablas espanol! Yo tambien! Soy de Guatemala originalmente. Y usted?
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usted? Ah, me recuerda de mis pruebas de espanol ("no es 'tu' ues 'USTED'")
Ja, pero no se como escirbir el espanol bien, siempre escribo palabras mal, porque yo... (I taught myself how to read and write, since my parents just spoke it and never bothered to teach me it since we're in "america")
Pero, puedo escribir suficiente para communicarme? ESPERO!
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hahaha! esta bien, pues no me acuerdo como activar el programa de espanol en mi computadora para poner los tildes y acentos necesarios. Admiro mucho el esfuerzo que ha hecho para aprender como escribir y leer en espanol
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ja, creo que en Microsoft Word- en OPTIONS se puede abrir
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It sounds interesting! This is a creative cover, I love the way Yondaime's coat is tied around Naruto's neck. :]
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Well, I'm not a member to give you an *actual* critique, but heres what I got: I like the fact that Naruto has Minato's cape around his neck, it kinda gives a foreshadowing feel to what might happen. Great job.
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Vague, but still charming! Young Naruto makes me want to cuddle him +_+; Scary.... Your Yondaimes always turn out nicely, darn you! D8<
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T'is my admiration for Yondaime!!
Even in Yonda-Yon! XD
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Yonda-Yon is THE ultimate pokemon... How else would it be immune to regular pokeball attacks? XD
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lol, kick Lugia's butt, that's fo sure
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Ahahaha, Lugia doesn't even come close to him o_o;
Too awesome.
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What about Digala and Palkia? Nah, I'm just kidding. Lucairo is my favorite.
Wait! Minato = Lucario. Lucario is speedy. Get the connection?
I do.
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Hee, I got the connection! It kind of saddens me that Sasuke can use Chidori (when he's currently being so.....lame at the moment) >:
Talk about the irony of 2 fighting techniques against each other, eh?
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Minato: GDI, some PRICK is abusing mah chidori! KAKASHI, YOU FOOL! ;A; *weeps in the afterlife*
No offense to Sasuke lovers out tharr... Really
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Naruto se ve tan tierno x33
y Minato se ve... tan el mismo (eso no tiene mucho sentido LoL xDD)
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XD Como que se ve un poco enfadon Naruto, o no?
ja, broma
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como se diria aqui... se ve mañoso xDD
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