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amylaser-void-star — Facing the Wind
#girl #wind #woman
Published: 2018-11-28 07:52:10 +0000 UTC; Views: 191; Favourites: 21; Downloads: 0
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Tools Used: Krita, mouse, laptop.
Things to work on:
* drawing eyes, nose, and lips.
* evenly shading the hair.
* making the eyes less dark, to match the tones of the face.
Feedback would be appreciated. :^)
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Comments: 10
Personally I think the eyes look pretty good, it's just that they don't look as soft compared to the rest of the drawing when you look up close. The nose and lips, yeah that could use some work. The mouth in particular looks rather small. The hair has a nice feather look to it. The biggest plus side to the drawing is the soft colors and textures to it. It makes the piece feel warm and inviting. The use of shading on the face and chest is also really well done. A background would also go a long way in making the piece pop. Say, a nice blue sky with dandy lion seeds flowing through the wind. The style is also very lovely, it looks very naruto esque in the design. Overall, it's not a bad piece but I do agree with some of the criticisms you have with the piece.
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Thanks for the critique! Everything you said is pretty spot-on. I particularly like the suggestion to include dandelion seeds flowing in the wind. Perhaps I'll return to this painting and add them sometime in the future. :^)
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Awesome, really captured the wind well with this slight #Pocahantas pose. Nice work
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This piece looks so beautiful. The colors and textures are very smooth and your proportions are perfect. I can see how hard you have tried on this piece and it clearly shadows through in your hard work in trying to get things exactly right. Your shading is very well done, reflecting the (What I guess is) sun as the wind flows through the girl's hair. As an ex still life art student I know how hard it can be to draw facial features but I would like to tell you this. You have done really well with it and personally I don't see a problem with the way that you have drawn them. The only thing I would say is to perhaps add something to the background. nothing too much but maybe something simple such as some faint shapes to perhaps represent the wind? I dunno XD. Overall, very well done. Have some icons 
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Thanks for the compliments! I admit I skimped on the background since I wanted to focus on drawing the form of the girl in the painting. I will definitely keep your advice in mind for future pieces, though.
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Trust me I know how hard it is to draw people. I used to draw from a model each week
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you did really nice on the drawing as a whole, and since your were concentrating on lips and eyes I I think you did really good on those too 
The lips have a good tone and eyes are ncley portioned, but the nose does look a bit flat ^^
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Thanks for the feedback! I'll be sure to work on drawing noses too.
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