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AshiiAshAsh [2011-04-20 13:54:29 +0000 UTC]
this 1 is awesum!!!
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QueenOfKites [2011-04-20 13:13:12 +0000 UTC]
Try to use more smooth lines, they are too rough. Also, don't move the pen back and forth on the paper, but use single strokes from the same side.
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An1gIrLz83 In reply to QueenOfKites [2011-04-20 19:31:35 +0000 UTC]
im really a novice artist so im not quite sure what you meen :S lol explane a little more ^_^'''
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QueenOfKites In reply to An1gIrLz83 [2011-04-21 12:46:20 +0000 UTC]
Uh, imagine you hold the pen on the paper and want to, I don't know, paint someone's shadow. What you did was moving the pen back and forth without taking it away, which we're all compelled to do because it's faster, but it looks bad. So for example, instead of moving the pen in a single zigzag-line from right to left, draw a line in one direction, take away the pen and do the next line until you've shaded the whole, eh, shadow.
As for the other thing I said, that's kinda hard to explain... The lines should be curvier, that's about it. And don't press so hard on the paper, try using gentler movements and stuff.
Also, try not to color outside of the lines. This one's easy to do, I promise. Have much luck XD
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Kdreamer92 [2011-04-20 13:01:12 +0000 UTC]
Awesome job. ^_^
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