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Anaeo-vale — The Weight of the World
Published: 2010-05-20 16:56:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 1477; Favourites: 52; Downloads: 40
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This is my latest manip. I'm quite happy with it
He's supposed to be carrying the planet on a string, but it got so bright you can't really see it
oh, well
stock:
horse - ~Ulvar-Stock
background - ~FoxStox
planets - #resurgere
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I'm aware I promised you critique, but I realize that I must be something I'm not in order to do so, a Premium member. Anyways, I suppose critiquing in this way is fine as well.
I like your overall image, the idea and everything appears to be stunning at first to the eye in a glance. But once you look closely, you notice little faults that aren't too important.
Your grounding is definitely better than some I've seen, but it could use a bit of work. Unlike my problem, you "underdid" it, making the horse look like it's stepping on "rock grass", though not so bad that it looks like it's floating instead of grounded. Your cutting is a tad bad in some areas, and the ear...it looks like a block..? Or am I hallucinating? Your horse is also a tad out of focus, so if you can, try to make the horse "clearer". Your mane's a little odd, but I like the coloring of it and all. The back hind foot also looks a bit smudged. It'll just come with practice and experience, and your technique. Also, your shadow is a bit off in my opinion, and would be good if you switched it around to fit the light source. Since the planets create a light, and are both in the right corner area, your shadow should be in the opposite place and a bit stretched. Besides that, good work!
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thanks!
ah! I can see what you mean by the shadow 
hehe, I actually had to paint the feet 
thanks pointing out some stuff
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No problem, and my pleasure!
Oh...okay, then the forelock needs a bit of fixing as well in that case.
Ah, yes. I've done that before. You might want to use the background eraser and just erase away bits of the hooves to show some grass. It works better at times than painting grass over.
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yes!
I turned it on if you'd like to critique it
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Sure. I'll try to write constructive critique on every little wrong thing I see. I'm glad you'll accept critique though, as it's sort of instinctual for me.
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lol, I get that way too sometimes
another perspective is always appreciated though
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Yeah, I got into one today. Yup, same here. I appreciate critique, no matter how harsh.
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Really nice, especially the lighting. I love glowy things, esecially blue ones. The eye looks very . . . creey in an adds-to-the-art way.
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thanks! hehe, I had fun with the "static" coming from the planet
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wow this is aweosme
makes my fear of horses worse lol but still amazing
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