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Published: 2011-12-02 16:35:41 +0000 UTC; Views: 481; Favourites: 8; Downloads: 4
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commission for , she's his OC named Aerikaat first, i decided not to put any of this month's commissions in my deviantart page (because this month's commissions are mostly girl OCs;s i'm afraid my gallery would look a bit boring)
but this one's an exception. since i haven't drawn a vector commission in quite a long time i think it's pretty safe to say that this is one of my masterpieces yet; damn right; i'm very proud of this one, i gave it my best on this one.
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Comments: 2
Hello, lazy! Great job on this vector art! 
The hands seem a bit large to me, probably because the wrists and lower arms are so thin. The right hand (her left one) should be a bit smaller, I think, because it's further away from the viewer (foreshortened).
I also had to look at that hand several times because of the fingers. I am sure now that you got it right, it just looks a bit confusing at first. I think you can easily solve that by adding some more shadow to the hand and maybe moving the thumb a bit towards the other fingers. Maybe you could also make the wrist more noticeable. Her hand seems to meld into the lower arm right now.
In general, I suggest making the tip of the fingers and her left shoe (from her POV) more round.
But excellent work on the design and the colors!
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