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Description Submitted for the "Kiss your own ass" contest.
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As always, I started off with a hand drawing, then Photoshopped all over it. The first image was made with transparency effect; not the latest one.

For the contest, I chose one of my first OCs, which I drew in March 2006, three years ago. The original intention back then was to make a D&D character that would draw power from a gem on her forehead. I tried to make it look like a generic pegasus knight from the "Fire Emblem" games, which mostly consisted of a blue breast armor over long, simple vestments. Blue/purple colors were also considered norms I wanted to consider for the hair. With these in mind, I did as well as I could to create a similar OC with my present talent.

This contest was just one more step for me. I learn with each new drawing I make, and the difference is easily seen each time I work to get better. I just made the step bigger this time, and was mostly able to improve my body proportions (I pratically never draw full bodies) and clothes folds (which was the very first time I ever tried seriously doing some). I'm really happy about the folds. It's one of my first tries about doing a pose too.

That was for the new improvements. If I'm amazed at my own progress between every new drawing I do, just imagine over the last three years ! There's no comparison.

- I wasn't able to do full bodies. It isn't the case anymore.
- I wouldn't risk doing hands. I'm not yet that great with them, but I manage to do them somehow.
- The eyes were... let's just say I was trying to do eyes back then, and I love to do them now...
- Colors were badly chosen, let alone the lack of hading. The new drawing has a better color choice, contrast, shading.
- The hair strands seemed randomly done; not anymore.
- There were no details at all. I still need to work on these, but it isn't that bad.
- There was no expression. See ? She's smiling now. She's got a reason to be happy, after all. ^^
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Comments: 9

Mytis [2009-10-26 23:09:50 +0000 UTC]

Trรจs belle coloration!!

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Nirelleth [2009-05-08 17:28:11 +0000 UTC]

Hey dear

both need to be done in the same medium though!

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Andell In reply to Nirelleth [2009-05-09 04:19:47 +0000 UTC]

Well, both of them were done by coloring in Photoshop 2.0, over a hand drawing. It is as much as I know the same medium, though the method was different.

THe use of different options of the program (like the transparency effect) is up to me, isn't it ?

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Nirelleth In reply to Andell [2009-05-09 09:14:03 +0000 UTC]

yes you can use different options, but yes, if you did both like that i assume it is acceptable, I understood your artist's comment wrong.

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DemoraFairy [2009-04-29 15:27:22 +0000 UTC]

That is an insane amount of improvement! The new one is coloured so amazingly, it looks almost professional! The original drawing is so much better too, like you've said with the details, and she's got a more interesting pose now. Really well done with this, it's amazing!

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Andell In reply to DemoraFairy [2009-05-01 04:14:33 +0000 UTC]

You have my gratitude for the comment. ^^ The problem with this kind of improvement is that you can't get to appreciate your own drawings a few months after you drew them...

I have also seen what you had done for the contest. You're quite amazing as well ! It seems like I have a long way to go to reach the talent shown in your new result (and even your old version of the drawing, in fact ^^'. You can be proud of what you did ! On my side, I'll keep improving until I can do as well as you.

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DemoraFairy In reply to Andell [2009-05-01 07:56:17 +0000 UTC]

That's ok Yeah, sometimes I find old pictures I did ages ago and think 'oh god did I draw that?!' lol

And thanks when I was doing it I had the older version in the same Photoshop file to compare them as I went along, and it wasn't until right near the end I thought the new one was better than the old one, for ages I prefered the first one lol and I think you're already better than me! Your colouring is a lot more realistic, and the eyes and hair are stunning! Also your characters have folds which mine never do, they always have perfectly ironed clothes because I can't draw folds lol

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Andell In reply to DemoraFairy [2009-05-12 04:52:17 +0000 UTC]

You do have awesome folds on your "Elven Beauty V2". I wouldn't be able to do half of what you did on the clothes.

Although it's a good, first serious try for me, my folds don't seem as natural as yours on that one.

I usually do ironed clothes as well, but I'll keep improving so that it won't happen much again.

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DemoraFairy In reply to Andell [2009-05-12 06:07:44 +0000 UTC]

I didn't draw that though lol, I just coloured it. So any folds that look like they're because of the colour I did, but I was pretty much just following the line art. There's very little in my gallery that I drew from scratch, I've got loads I want to colour but just haven't got round to it lol.
I like the folds you did on this, some people can go overkill on folds, but I think you've got it right. Especially since it's a tightish dress anyway there wouldn't be that many folds.

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