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Name- Ruzazaage- thousands of years old XD
gender- female
platoon- Dark Keroro platoon
likes- Gold, antiques, fighting, mexican food, silk, etc.
dislikes- Being overwhelmed, technology, greasy food, being defeated, feeling weak, etc.
bio- She was the protector of phaoroah, but was crystalized and awakened in the present day.
crush- Doruru
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Comments: 56
Hello, I suppose we've met. Onto my intentions here.
Her design is pretty nice. It's not too cluttered, yet not simple. The 'theme' is kept in place as well.
The angling of the head is a little awkward though. The hat part is curved as if she was looking up, not down. Her left arm is a little short, but that might be the perspective.. It's hard to tell. The left leg seems a little too long, and the calve is too thick. The foot is too large compared to the other.
Also, here's a tip for the bracelets, make a small bulge on both sides to show it's not really a marking. (Like this: [link] )
It's best I don't go into the information.
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Oh, thanks for pointing that out. ^ ^ I'll keep that in mind.
Ah right, i'll do that next time. ^ ^
Thanks for the tips! ^ ^
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I..really don't think it's a good idea to consistently pair characters with the canons. dude. people really hate that..not to mention she looks waaay too much like Sababa/Shivava
you really look like you are trying to hard to get popular with things like this <:/ people don't like characters with large creepy eye lashes with little to no information...or rip offs of another character. they just seem them as mary sue's stinking the place up.
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Heh heh, thank for brightening my day, that's the funniest thing I've heard today! XD Coming from you was PRICELESS! XD But again, thank you so much. ^ ^
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...gee thanks for being disrespectful the person trying to help you.
[link] there are two confessions there about ya :/ enjoy.
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Oh my God, I'm still laughing even now! XD Thanks so much for making me laugh, haven't laughed like that in YEARS! XD
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geez you are rude.
Why use the canon characters as stepping stools? can't you be more orignal then using a canon character as a crutch?
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A crutch? Only one of my characters has a disability of being blind, sorry! No broken legs here! XD
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Are you not reading or are you purposely being an asshole? plus thats just offensive, say that to someone is blind and 50$ says you'll get slapped. You have a very bad attitude.
I have lost all respect for you. if you can't be orignal for once and not pair with a canon 99.9% the time and not rip another character of you are nothing but a another 12 year old that got on DA before knowing what the hell originally was.
I've been in the keroro fandom for 4 fucking years. I know what the hell is going to happen. HELL it's already happened too ya. Tch truth be told I wouldn't be surprised if your ripping off Kariri here.
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My apologies, didn't mean to offend.~
I've been here in the fandom for about the same time. ^ ^ Great, we have something in common other then CanonXOC pairings! ^ ^
Oh, and why do you care about my characters and what I do?
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Right your still being a douche bag and being sarcastic.
Tiiiiiight I dought that, I only almost 2 years ago. not 4.
Well I only really have 1, it's best to stick with one without accumulating a lot of hate and being labeled as a pairing sue.
Because you posted them on the internet, don't like people giving you actually criticism? DON'T post it on the net then, because that means you are opening up your stuff to it, and everyone cares, and you would too if you actually gave a shit about characters and not rip off the kids of the Shurara corps or M.Y him self
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I swear I'm not being sarcastic, I'm actually laughing. You can take that to the bank!~
Eh, I don't care. ^ ^ I post it for people who want to see it. Don't like it? I don't care! XD That's your problem! XD
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Uh hu. okaaay
Well not really, you can't say "don't like it don't care" because if you don't care about your art clearly means you should not be making it.
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I draw because I like to, not because of others opinion.
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Sometimes it best to take in other opinions if you want to improve. if you don't your just being arrogant.
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I take nice opinions. ^ ^
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so your basically taking the ones that don't point out whats actually wrong.
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No. I listen to critique if it's put politely, in so far I haven't heard any.
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Well I was being polite but you treated me rather badly about it.
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What's polite in our society these days I wonder?
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well not cussing for one.
There is a difference between being polite, and rude, and i was simply saying I'm rather disappointing you always use the canons instead of other oc's and turning into quite the pairing sue.
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True, but that doesn't equal decency.
Still found it rude though. ^ ^
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-nods-
Just because you don't like it, does not make it rude.
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Eh, it's all in the interpretation.
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-nods-
That and I don't really think this is a fitting character for Doruru. he lives on another planet with the rest of the DK66. (Nor does she look like a military officer.)
She looks like more a girl that would be lost on present day stuff if she really is 1,000 years old. and possibly would only speak Egyptian..Old Egyptian for that matter. (On the matter of look, she also looks more Arabic then Egyptian)
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Yeah, she is a bit behind. (by many years XD)
Dai Gunsou and his platoon are looking for alien technology in pyramids and they find her. Miruru feels bad for her and "takes her in" and, picking on Doruru, Dai Gunso tells Doruru he's her mentor.
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actually Miruru is not seen with the platoon when going to the new planet, so she's not there.
That would make little sense since Doruru I don't believe would know how to handle another person like that, even more so one that is years behind. There was a reason he was kicked out of the army.
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ok.
Yeah i know; there's the joke. XD
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..That's not a very good joke.
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I'm more upset on how much of a brat you are acting because I pointed out whats wrong.
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Eh, sorry. XD Oh, btw, LOVE the TUMBLR trolling! X3
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-srugs- I don't really think it's trolling, I think they are serious.
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riiiight like a whiny child that shames people into thinking they are wrong for telling the truth understand that.
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really i don't see you maturing in the future and or improving.
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I'm actually quite mature, thank you. ^ ^
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How can ya tell what mature is?
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I'm 18 years old what do you think bratzila :/?
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Yes Bratzila :v because you are quite frankly being a brat, not to mention looking very retarded for using the troll face at the very wrong time.
Explains why ya acting like a brat and refusing to take constructive criticism unless it's ass pats.
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Oh well. ^ ^
I accept nice criticism as I said earlier.
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Then why the fuck are you treating me badly for pointing out what is wrong? or for that matter being disappointed in you.
I mean really you have managed to make me lose all respect for you, your nothing but another bratty kid artist in my eyes that thinks everything must be "sexy" when it's really an eye burning piece of shit, and a god awful mary sue rip off of another character, or you ruin every damn canon character you get a chance at, like ooh say:
giving a male character a sex change and turning it into a godawful rip off of another canon character, and make them that 'just without the traumas' really how stupid of a character is that? you're basically stealing M.Y's character. you haven't even bothered to change that pink peace o-crap into at lest another oc to make it a less peace of shit.
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Truth in fact Ma'dam. your 14 you should at LEST know enough to not copy another character, be it oc or canon, it's the lest orignal thing possible and really frowned upon, recoloring is not smart in any world. it's stealing.
pairing every oc with a canon is just as stupid, even more with making them highly out of character, and ripping a already set in stone canon story like X1, into pieces just to fit the character in, that is high on the mary sue meter. Plus people don't like seeing a mary sue bastardize the canon character, it's very disrespectful to the creator. one the main reasons OcxCanon is labeled so badly because so many stupid kids do this.
Oh and lets not forget Keronian boobs :/ the number one stupidest thing to do in the keroro fandom, The second would be not doing actually research, because if you did you'd known all the Shurara corps are OC's and pairing with them is basically stealing.
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Oh I fixed that after someone critiqued me.
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if I recall it took a few people before you actually stopped it.
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