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Description Prosper grumpily banged his feet against the solid wood of the examination table he was sitting atop. He knew his mother was ignoring him, and, even worse, not even bothering to hide it, sitting across the room reading one of the many magazines that where piled on the small tables. He hated going to the doctor. Dr. Knowles always ruffled his hair too hard and talked too loud. If he told Prosper that he had to get a shot he was going to run for it. Stubbornly continuing to glare at his oblivious mother, he clenched his fingers around the edges of the table and waited for the stupid doctor to come in.

However, when the door finally did open, instead of seeing the large, obnoxious, slightly balding old man that he had come to expect, he was faced with- unexpectedly- the most beautiful woman he had ever seen, with long brown hair and a pretty face.

"Hey there, Prosper," she said with a smile that lit up her face, "I'm Jane. Dr. Knowles is on vacation right now, so I'm going to be helping you out today."

Prosper didn't answer, staring at her wordlessly with his mouth hanging open. He looked quickly over at his mother, silently begging her to take the doctor's attention off of him. His mother just smiled and lifted the magazine higher to cover her face.

"So, you're six now, Prosper?" Jane asked him, the smile still present on her face as her eyes scanned the paper on her clipboard. Prosper nodded, a blush working it's way up his neck, and looked at the floor. Despite the doctor's attempt to draw him into a conversation about what he was learning at school, he was silent for the rest of the check-up, occasionally sneaking his head up to look at her once more- inevitably jerking his head back down when Jane caught him staring.

Β Β Once the examination was over, the doctor cheerfully informed Prosper that he didn't need to get a shot that day, and Prosper was silently astonished. Pretty, nice, and wasn't going to give him a shot? He had been debating throughout the examination, but he now concluded that the only way to describe this feeling was love. Which meant there was only one thing left to do, something Mommy told him happened when two people were in love.

"Will you marry me?" He blurted out, blushing furiously, but face upturned hopefully. Jane had been writing notes carefully on her clipboard, but at Prosper's proposal a large grin came over her face and she bent over a little so she could look Prosper in the eye.

"I would love to, Prosper, but I'm already taken." She informed him, holding up her left hand to show him the ring glittering there.

"Okay." Prosper mumbled, the word barely legible, his face bright red. His mother had one hand over her mouth to cover up a smile, and Jane and her exchanged a look Prosper couldn't read. Jane brightly informed him that he was healthy, fit, and, she added with a wink, quite handsome.

"I probably won't see you for a while, Prosper," she told him, "Dr. Knowles should be back by your next appointment, but it was nice to get to know you," She left the room then, giving him and his mother one last smile as she went.

"Well, you are growing up fast, aren't you, Pros?" His mother said as they walked out to their car. Prosper, on the other hand, was contemplating something completely different. Jane had said Dr. Knowles would be back soon, but if Prosper, say... broke a bone in the next couple days, he would probably see her again. A broken bone was a small price for love, wasn't it?
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Comments: 220

Jillh17 [2013-06-29 13:48:16 +0000 UTC]

AWWWW so cute!

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KatenissElisadeen12 [2013-04-21 00:45:54 +0000 UTC]

Awww, so cute!!

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Woodrunner-Suzette [2013-04-17 22:27:31 +0000 UTC]

Can we do the challenge if we don't have any characters already?
BTW: should be a hyphen btwn "five" and "part" (just sayin )

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X-RAES [2012-11-14 17:12:22 +0000 UTC]

Haha he's adorable

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EvilVSCactusJuice [2012-09-26 04:50:28 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing. I once was tempted to ask my kindergarten teacher's husband to marry me. He was a substitute teacher when I was in elementary school and I had the biggest crush on him.

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Stored-with-yew-bow [2012-08-24 12:16:24 +0000 UTC]

this really great! will you write whole book? please?

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fudge-muffin2112 [2012-08-08 05:45:51 +0000 UTC]

This is soooo cute! I love it!

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Bionic-Kitty [2012-08-01 23:54:06 +0000 UTC]

it takes alot to get me to laugh aloud when i read something but this definitely did it XD i can't get over how believable your characters are and how you get in the mind of an ignorant six-year-old boy and execute it so well VERY funny and i like your writing style too ^^

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Gryffindorstimelord [2012-07-16 20:23:36 +0000 UTC]

This is soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeee!

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Wolfeyes32 [2012-06-28 17:46:19 +0000 UTC]

Challenge accepted!

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Firerose1026 [2012-06-14 02:17:34 +0000 UTC]

AWWWW SOO Cute!!!!!

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SheBeeSalty [2012-06-05 03:36:53 +0000 UTC]

: D
CHALLENGE = ACCEPTED
: D

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livburry16 [2012-05-16 21:56:53 +0000 UTC]

Uh, SO CUTE!!! D'AWWW!

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AmeliadosSantos [2012-05-11 23:01:50 +0000 UTC]

I (think I) am in love with Prosper...

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StarCatcher37 [2012-03-10 22:11:45 +0000 UTC]

AWWW! SO ADORABLE!

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Demigods4ever [2012-03-08 02:43:32 +0000 UTC]

ha! this is the best! u r awesome!!! i hope u become an author so i can read ur books!!

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messo50 [2012-03-04 01:35:07 +0000 UTC]

I shall do this challenge with my slightly deranged hero char

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SecretArtist13 [2012-02-25 04:24:55 +0000 UTC]

Aw! This was so cute! I love your writing style.

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woodsykid [2012-02-11 12:54:47 +0000 UTC]

First of all, i cannot write unless it is an SOL test (VA stuff) and i am barely good at drawing, the only time i am really good at doing something is when i have a ball of clay in my hands, but i like reading other people's works
and yours has so far been pretty cewl

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Eleni-Hoax [2012-01-29 04:29:58 +0000 UTC]

Aw these are cute. You do a great job capturing how a little kid's mind works. It was nicely done.

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juliafumes [2011-12-26 19:57:18 +0000 UTC]

Very funny! ^^

Love it <3

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nicolegraffitty [2011-12-23 11:46:58 +0000 UTC]

d'awwwww!! sooo cute!

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DNA-The-Authoress [2011-12-20 22:26:55 +0000 UTC]

So cute! I love little boys... Even when they're not listening to me and driving me bonkers. XD
Ooh, challenge! One that I shall have to take up AFTER Christmas! But looks fun! ^-^

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AndThenYou In reply to DNA-The-Authoress [2011-12-20 22:34:23 +0000 UTC]

good, you should try it!
and thanks, I really appreciate the compliment

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DNA-The-Authoress In reply to AndThenYou [2011-12-20 23:39:46 +0000 UTC]

I will!
You're welcome! I've become addicted to these little stories. They're so adorable! My muse is calling, but Christmas presents must be finished first... XD

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RaniJashalithie [2011-12-11 16:56:17 +0000 UTC]

Awwwwwwwwwww.......This was adorable!

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WaterWaves [2011-09-27 21:49:10 +0000 UTC]

Oh Gosh, I am so doing this with my newly-made NaNoWriMo characters. It would be great development. Great Job, by the way!

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AndThenYou In reply to WaterWaves [2011-09-27 22:59:25 +0000 UTC]

Ahhh, that's awesome! Nano characters are fun to mess with C:

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WaterWaves In reply to AndThenYou [2011-09-27 23:54:38 +0000 UTC]

I know! It's been amazing and I haven't even started Nano yet ^.^

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dizzymixer [2011-09-07 11:32:46 +0000 UTC]

just thought I should let you know I love Blair and Prosper, and good on you for going for it with your sister and making stuff from it. It's great!

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Poshyos [2011-09-03 02:57:46 +0000 UTC]

aww!!! poor prosper!!how embarassing...

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Converse-peace13 [2011-08-20 04:10:02 +0000 UTC]

AWWWWW!!!!!

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spirit1297 [2011-08-19 02:17:48 +0000 UTC]

cutie!

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horsesforlife [2011-08-18 22:36:55 +0000 UTC]

im totally doing the challenges!!! first i need two characters....

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AndThenYou In reply to horsesforlife [2011-08-19 00:46:27 +0000 UTC]

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horsesforlife In reply to AndThenYou [2011-08-19 01:16:08 +0000 UTC]

haha!! i already have a basic idea of what they look like and their attitude, but its gonna take a while. a Looooooong while..

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AndThenYou In reply to horsesforlife [2011-08-19 18:09:00 +0000 UTC]

making characters is the best part, in my opinion

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horsesforlife In reply to AndThenYou [2011-08-20 23:46:18 +0000 UTC]

Same! you can really express yourself. and its fun!! ive made a few equine characters, but its a lot easier cuz well they are horses...

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GreyGal2000 [2011-08-18 08:06:21 +0000 UTC]

Omg I am totally doing those little challenges! >8D

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AndThenYou In reply to GreyGal2000 [2011-08-19 00:46:33 +0000 UTC]

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GreyGal2000 In reply to AndThenYou [2011-10-10 19:33:45 +0000 UTC]

Yo finally getting round to this - could I do 'Five times (someone) SAW (someone else) cry' instead? It'd be easier But I'll do the others too n___n

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AndThenYou In reply to GreyGal2000 [2011-10-11 18:40:30 +0000 UTC]

Of course! Feel free to mess around with it however you'd like! C:

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GreyGal2000 In reply to AndThenYou [2011-08-19 19:25:37 +0000 UTC]

Hahaa! I'll send you a link when I'm done n__n

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Scottiii [2011-08-17 17:10:08 +0000 UTC]

This one made me grin uncontrollably! Prosper is so adorable! I'll take you up on that challenge

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AndThenYou In reply to Scottiii [2011-08-19 00:46:57 +0000 UTC]

Awesome! I hope you have fun writing them- I know I did

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ravenclaw99 [2011-08-15 19:09:31 +0000 UTC]

awwwwwwww so cute i'll try the challenges

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AndThenYou In reply to ravenclaw99 [2011-08-16 01:05:30 +0000 UTC]

AWWWY YEAH

I can't wait to see what you come up with! Also, thanks for reading. It means a lot

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ravenclaw99 In reply to AndThenYou [2011-08-16 16:23:47 +0000 UTC]

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jingo-TASTIC [2011-08-07 05:46:10 +0000 UTC]

Aww!
(Hmm...maybe I'll do the last prompt! )

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AndThenYou In reply to jingo-TASTIC [2011-08-16 01:05:58 +0000 UTC]

You should try it! I'm sure you'll come up with something awesome

thanks for reading!

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