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anduril — Breathless Anticipation
Published: 2002-10-10 21:03:42 +0000 UTC; Views: 193; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 25
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Breathless AnticipationButterflies ripple in waves of agitation.
Strangled within a stomach ruled by
Anticipation. So beautiful you are, so
graceful you were. Oh night never end!
Your eyes flutter speaking words without
sound, volumes of meaning and dreams.
Closer our heads move, breath becomes one.
Torrents of fire race through my veins,
pulse pounding; driving; still my heart.
There is no world beyond thse glowing orbs.
Gravity beyond measure, sight beyond sound.
I see...
Lips touch and explosions of flame melt
away. Cold ice drags me down a river
of gentle wine. Sweet tasting air!
Oh precious air; great gasps.
You are.
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Comments: 5
a very lovely poem. very descriptive. it gave me a very detailed picture of what was going on, shows great imagery. good job, man!
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this is great. it shows tons of emotion and feeling. just reading it gave me warm fuzzies all over this is definatly a great piece. keep up the good work.
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i love the amount of vivid imagery in this poem. and your style is also perfectly matched to your ideas. it drives the poem forward. it's just so wonderfully put too. your words give it so much meaning. absolutey great job!
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"Your eyes flutter speaking words without
sound, volumes of meaning and dreams."
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I got a pretty cool visual picture in my head after reading this...Great way of describing everything . The first stanza is amazing, i like it!
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