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anduril — Music of the Soul
Published: 2002-04-29 23:08:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 54; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 6
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Description Music - the words of your soul and mine.
They pick you up and drift you down,
the lonely highway of ones own mind.
They draw you in and hold you tight,
whispering their dreams for this night.

Messages of hopes and dreams, of pain
and silence deep enough to stain. All
have some form of story to tell.

When a friend sings a song, carrying
the toon to dance beside the moon,
listen close to what is said and not.
For music is the avenue of the heart,
telling all that cannot be told, releasing
what they wanted to hold for any who
want to hear what they wish or fear.
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Comments: 1

ear-parcel [2002-05-04 03:03:10 +0000 UTC]

although the poem is okay, the rhyme comes across a bit forced, and the imagery a bit cliche.

although i do like the line "music is the avenue of the heart."
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love yourself and others will follow.

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