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Dominique-x [2008-07-13 21:34:22 +0000 UTC]
Now I lay me down to sleep,
I pray the Lord my soul to keep;
And if I die before I wake,
I pray the Lord my soul to take.
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Should credit the original prayer, then this should be fine.
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AngelJaganshi In reply to Dominique-x [2008-07-14 17:36:16 +0000 UTC]
You don't read very well do you...I had put up there that it was wtriten in rythem to the prayer but I didn't know what it was called.
If you read you would have seen 'This is written to the rythem of the prayer you say before you go to bed.'
But I guess you were so stuck on rubbing it my face that "I'm not original to read snything else. You have such a one track mind that you don't know how to think differently. And I guess you haven't read anything else of mine so again. Stop degrating my poetry because you don't know what's you are messing with.
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Dominique-x In reply to AngelJaganshi [2008-07-14 18:22:28 +0000 UTC]
'Stop degrading my poetry because you don't know what you're messing with'? Please. I'm moving my reply to a note, out of respect. Read it, please.
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SoulReaper418 [2008-06-09 02:15:51 +0000 UTC]
wow that's good. i like how you used yhe prayer to give it rythem and a sence of betrayal.
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Tenshi-Kurama [2008-06-08 13:01:04 +0000 UTC]
That was very good. and DARK
Raito: ^^ I like dark
Tyrus: No, I like dark, you enjoy evil....
Tenshi: O.O
Israfel: Did you have to use an innocent little childrens prayer to make it though?
Cameron: *silent;thumbs up*
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