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angelnevaeh — Dear Angie
Published: 2003-11-22 03:05:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 65; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 3
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Description I sit here and wonder about all the things,
Things that you put me through and more.
I loved you but now those feelings are gone;
All you did was throw me out the door.

You were supposed to be my mother,
The one that was supposed to be there for me,
But you weren’t and I never understood that;
You did nothing, not even set me free.

Hoping and praying you would let me leave
But, no I had to argue and fight my way out.
I was fortunate and had a place to go.
When I won I knew you would be delighted without a doubt.

You looked so happy on the day I left--
How can you leave your child behind?
I will never know why you did.
Love conquers all, but you were fucking blind.

You gave me away for a man not worth loving.
You followed him before raising your seed.
You say, “He is the one for me.”
You never saw my tears, never saw my heart bleed.

Hoping someday you would figure out you were wrong,
You know I never did give up.
You must be so mental that you didn’t get it,
So I guess you have just gotten corrupt.

You abandoned your child and now we are through.
I’ll never trust you or call you mother again.
I hope you remember what all you let go,
But you shall never know me, you didn’t even then.
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Comments: 7

darkfaerie33 [2003-11-22 03:23:50 +0000 UTC]

I LOVE THIS ONE TOO- omg u r such a good poet u r so on my devwatch!!!! love it, keep up the awesum work!!!

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angelnevaeh In reply to darkfaerie33 [2003-11-22 03:33:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks alot...never had anyone watch me before *looks over shoulders* But thanks! hehe

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darkfaerie33 In reply to angelnevaeh [2003-11-22 03:39:42 +0000 UTC]

lol, yah devwatched u, hehe but ure a great poet so keep it coming lol

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angelnevaeh [2003-11-22 03:23:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I work kind of hard on my rhyme scheme. It didnt take me to much time to write this one as it was just following out me. Funny how emotions can do that...

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CierraGLGates [2003-11-22 03:10:03 +0000 UTC]

wow. i dont know what else to say. you express your feelings beautifully, and once again i love the rhyme scheme.

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angelnevaeh In reply to CierraGLGates [2003-11-22 03:30:45 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, I work kind of hard on my rhyme scheme. It didnt take me to much time to write this one as it was just following out me. Funny how emotions can do that...

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CierraGLGates In reply to angelnevaeh [2003-11-22 03:45:06 +0000 UTC]

yeah i understand

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