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Published: 2004-09-14 21:30:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 178; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 5
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Description Even angels fall, stumble to earth.
   Wings do not mean you can fly.
The heart is often a prison.
   Holding your mind on one thing.
One angel should be mine, I am sure
  that mine has fallen, like me,
forgotten what she wanted ony to
   live with the pain of knowing
that she could fly..........once.
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Comments: 13

defpoet [2004-12-23 04:06:15 +0000 UTC]

short yet very deep dude. * okay, i sound like im highlol* no but seriously, those are great lines, with tremendous meaning.
i always felt that shorter poems give off a sharper and profound effect...*shrugs*

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angelsbane In reply to defpoet [2004-12-23 06:56:45 +0000 UTC]

well thank you mucho I likes this one too......... I wrote it when I was vry stressed and well I love it.......thanks for the comment I really appreciate it..

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defpoet In reply to angelsbane [2004-12-24 18:57:01 +0000 UTC]

very welcome.

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MooglePirate9 [2004-12-01 14:57:30 +0000 UTC]

I like it. Will you continue on writing it? Because one of my poems that I wrote has evolved into a 27 page story in which I need to work on. So keep on writing and I hope to see more of your work. ^_^

*Please check out my gallery*

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angelsbane In reply to MooglePirate9 [2004-12-01 20:12:50 +0000 UTC]

hey yeah I wi ll try to keep on writing it tis a little hard right now but I shall do my best. OF COURSE I WILL CHECK OUT YOUR GALLERY...

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MooglePirate9 In reply to angelsbane [2004-12-02 12:28:41 +0000 UTC]

Thanks I started to write on my story at home again. I haven't typed on it since Nov 17! ^^:

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Vampire-Lea [2004-11-02 00:52:42 +0000 UTC]

Beatiful, don't know how i missed it before hehe

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FallynRayne [2004-09-25 21:42:19 +0000 UTC]

"Even angels fall, stumble to earth. Wings do not mean you can fly."

I am in love with this poem. I can definately see what you're trying to point out in the poem. "Angels Fall" is beautifully written. It's perfect. Definately going to be one of my favorites.

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angelsbane In reply to FallynRayne [2004-09-26 04:34:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much I like this one too...it is very personal to me.......... I am glad that you like it.....

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FallynRayne In reply to angelsbane [2004-09-26 05:07:20 +0000 UTC]

No problem..

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devil-child-666 [2004-09-17 00:57:55 +0000 UTC]

I really like this one, fav for sure, i absolutely love the first line "Even angels fall, stumble to earth.
Wings do not mean you can fly." good job :claps:

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pseudomask [2004-09-15 15:11:47 +0000 UTC]

You need to throw a huge ass stamp on and send yourself to Mexico.

The broken angel and how you draw your strength from her. Very emotional and your expressed yourself beautifully in this.

The truth of your seperation, although it hurts, in the end it'll hopefully make you stronger so you won't be broken.

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angelsbane In reply to pseudomask [2004-09-15 17:27:15 +0000 UTC]

one can only hope........................ thank you

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