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Cyber-Cypher [2017-02-08 00:07:31 +0000 UTC]

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I like how colors compliment one another and how the scarf dances with the wind. Good job!

Here is a list of things that you can improve on:

- Suggestion: In my opinion, I think the mouth would have looked better if the lips are thinner and the teeth are showing more. I don't know I prefer it that way.

- I think maybe there should be a little more going on the background. Like maybe add a comet or two or maybe a plane. That would be nice. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

- The shoulders are uneven. One of them is more curved while the other is flatter and wider.

I think you did a very good job with the hair and the coloring overall. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/> Hope this helps! :3

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Kaihaii [2017-02-05 22:34:28 +0000 UTC]

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Hello! i see your art in a.deviantart.net/avatars/p/r/p… " alt=" " title="ProjectComment" /> . First of all, i don't talk english, so if you don't understand some parts, is for that ;-; .
Ok, let's start. I think the best of this piece is the face whit the mask, i love it and the shadow is beautiful too. The problem here is the coloring, not all but some parts should be better, for example the hair, the brightness looks great, but is just that, i look the background and i think that the brightness of the hair should be more in bottom, and in the top more shadow, because i see the light is from below, this is just some details that make the draw much better. That goes for the t-shirt and the scarf too, but i know that she is she's turning her back on the sky, so the shadow it's great, but in my opinion you should put more lights, because the background give the impression that the sun is coming out (maybe more lights from the bottom, obviously). In my opinion, love the background and the mask, and the movement that you give to the t-shirt, the scarf and the hair. For last, the clavicle it's a little bit stange, if you want, search ''clavicle'' in google and look at the shape of it and compare it with your drawing. Ok, that's it! i hope you like the critique ;w; . Have a nice day! .

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Okami-Kitsune03 [2017-02-09 01:35:02 +0000 UTC]

Awesome job drawing Noodle from Gorillaz! ^^

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Idleye [2017-02-06 01:10:14 +0000 UTC]

Nicely done. Though I can spot a bit mistakes and give you some suggestions, if you don’t mind. I feel like her neck is too thin. Try and thicken it a tiny bit. I feel like that could help. Also her seems a bit squished, when looking the mouth and chin area. It’d be a lot better if it was a lot longer. Now, the background suggests that this about in the time of day where the sun is going down. So I feel like the stars on the bottom half should have a fading effect. And I think adding in ‘Gaussian Blur’ (assuming that you’re using PS) for the stars would be great. I think a little more contrast for the background would help out in making the stars pronounced. Going on to her hair, I feel like the white parts (?), not sure what to call it, is a bit overdone and unrealistic due to its redundancy. And taking the light source in consideration, the outline of this character should be highlighted for it to make sense. Everything else seems to be pretty good, besides the fact that the ears maybe place a bit too high on the head but then again the character can be looking at angle and giving off that illusion. 

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creepypastajack [2017-02-06 00:28:02 +0000 UTC]

Hello there, I found your piece through and I am here to critique it.
I am really fond of this piece because it reminds me of an Anime and I love Anime. I hope that was your intention.
I also love how well-detailed this picture is.
Your color scheme is also on point.
However, I do think you should have used some thicker outlines as your character is blending in with the background a bit too much.
I also don't think that much shine on the hair was necessary. I would have put one streak of shine on each bang and one streak of shine on her actual hair.
Her mask should also be completely covering her face. However, if you wanted her mouth to be exposed, I would have used a mask that looked more like this: www.deviantart.com/art/Mask-59…
I also would have made the stars more cross-shaped instead of just using dots.
I would also suggest putting more info about the character in the description.
Hope this helps!

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GloamDrifter [2017-02-05 15:15:29 +0000 UTC]

I love the Gorillaz, and you drew it just like it is in one of their music videos. Good job!
Windmill windmill for the land, turn forever hand in hand

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Chibimations [2017-02-05 13:58:15 +0000 UTC]

My god this is beautiful. I love Noodle to death. I really love the atmosphere you've created with the background and her expression, and your attention to detail is phenomenal

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niibnz [2017-02-05 13:38:31 +0000 UTC]

YESSSS NOODLE THIS LOOKS SO GOOD

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Artistic-Persona [2017-02-05 13:12:14 +0000 UTC]

Oh, this is beautiful! I love your attention to texture especially!

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Direwolfjacky [2017-02-05 01:37:54 +0000 UTC]

I like the way u drew her she looks awesome. 😁😆

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