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AniFreek13 — My Illness
Published: 2008-09-09 22:51:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 146; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 1
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Description I am sick
Said I to myself,
With the sickness called "Living"
the cure held in no shelf.

I lie here waiting
For the ill to be cured
But to you
It may be absurd.

I'd looked as if dead
Already, at last.
My fever, my "living"
Has yet to be past.

I feel it coming.
It is the cure!
I'll be rid of my fever,
Of that much I'm sure.

At long last
I'm cured of my "living" disease!
So if you would
Let me rest...please.
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Comments: 6

BleedingHeartsPoetry [2008-09-10 14:53:38 +0000 UTC]

I really like this one. The flow is very nice. Great job!

~*Mags

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AniFreek13 In reply to BleedingHeartsPoetry [2008-09-10 21:31:06 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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LastPoet [2008-09-09 22:52:33 +0000 UTC]

wow....
i like it

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AniFreek13 In reply to LastPoet [2008-09-09 22:54:39 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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LastPoet In reply to AniFreek13 [2008-09-10 07:13:05 +0000 UTC]

welcome im going to add you to my watch list your very good

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AniFreek13 In reply to LastPoet [2008-09-10 21:31:23 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again!

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