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this is an kinda old drawing i did of jay and his soul piercer...actually this is my first time i had ever colored with prisma markersRelated content
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this is badass i love it id love to do sum fanart of this
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oh yeah dude that be awesome cant wait to see
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well it can shoot the normal way but me and my writer have not worked out if he can but i think he should be able to shoot out the mouth of the gun with like a cero blast type thing if u dont know bleach cero is just a big blast thing
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oh crap, i had another idea. this other bloke with the glasses that you drew. have you thought about maybe making him like an elder brother? someone who knows what the protagonist is doing and observes him from the shadows to keep the stronger demons from attacking him after he starts building a rep as a demon killer. he could be a part of an order similar to the Illuminati or the Knights Templar. a group of people who cover as normies, but low key slay demons in secret. the controversy could worsen when the protagonist finds out, and realizes that this order isn't as clean as they act. maybe even to the extreme of enslaving demons and making them hunt other demons via using the same weapons to supress their power and independent thought or something. i already thought of one demon monk who'd wear these huge Akuma style beads that amplifies his already insane strength, but makes his character docile and meek. that bloke could have a whole "but i like the way i am with these beads on" trip, and gets deemed a traitor by other demons for giving in to his human captors. LoL sorry, i'm just sort of into it now.
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dude at first i didnt like the demon thing but that beads thing kinda sounds like a cool weapon or something oh and actually that guy with the glasses is from a whole other story wich is way more fleshed out then this one with demigods and demons and GODS it has a lot to do with greek mythology but mostly the less known gods are in it and its all cool if ur into it dude im actually really liking all ur ideas
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lol yeah somethin like that he is like spirit like yu yu hakusho
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yeah, like Yusuke if his spirit gun were a tangible object. now THATS a dope idea dude. mind if i use it in a story? LoL
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well go head that is not exactly the story behind this guy though
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oh really? what is it then? i always like getting the ideas behind a character from the artist if i ever get inspired by them.
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i havent fully fleshed out the story but the story is that he dies after he died after he did some kind of bad thing havent decided wat yet but he was doing it for his younger sibling so when he goes to the after life which is kind of like a court the holy guy thing rules that he is not fit to be in heaven and commands one of the officer (grim reaper) to escort him to his place in hell but as they are going the reaper tells him if he plays his game that he well let him live again and this game the reapers game as its called the players must capture a certain number (i never decided on how many he had to get) but after the reaper tells him this he gives him a choice of any weapon ever known to man and he chooses a some kind of big pistol type gun (oh that gun from hellsing that alucard uses) but he is thinking to him self why would he need a weapon if hes just collecting souls then the reaper gives him the rules (on a paper or something didnt decide) but of course in his arrogance h didnt listen then is sent off to collect like a teleport or something then (some how senses or sees the soul didnt decide) then sees some one else that kinda looks a lil weird but figures he is a ghost so that guy cant see him but the guy suddenly attacks with some strange weapon...thats as far as i got so basically after that the guy tells him about the game and how they all have to compete against each other in this game and that if he had read the rules then he would know how to summon the demon in his weapon (all the ppl playing the game have some kind of special thing to there weapon like the soul piercer which is the main characters gun) and also toward the end (or maybe the middle or the beginning idk) he has to collect his siblings soul and decides not to give it to death and because of this has to protect him self and his sibling from many of deaths minions like another character of mine simply named 2nd death
oh man that was a lot of typing i hope u under stood that
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LoL no man i totally follow you. thats an awesome story idea dude. so in a nutshell, our protagonist died once in a selfless act to protect his younger sibling. upon reaching the spirit world he's deemed unfit to ascend into heaven, and he is SUPPOSED to be banished to hell, where a whole host of hungry demons are waiting to devour him over and over again. the grim reaper however who is supposed to escort him there has other plans. instead of taking him to hell, he decides to make a wager with him, where he must collect x number of evil souls within an alloted amount of time (lets say one year). he lays before him that slew of weapons you talked about, and our protagonist settles on the pistol (not knowing its true form). now for the number of evil spirits he must collect, i dunno, maybe he could have like a tattoo or numerical mark on his skill that shows how many evil souls he's collected. every time he bags one, the number goes down. aside from having this weapon, when he gets back to earth he realizes that he has the ability to see demons, angels, and other supernatural creatures that he wasn't able to before. he doesn't follow the list of rules that death gave him, so perhaps our anti-hero could just be winging it and slays any demons that comes his way.
the constituate could be that if he doesn't collect all the demon souls within the time limit, he'll become a demon himself, and all the souls he's taken will be released on him in what will be an eternal hell where he must face them again and again and lose miserably. this is a cool idea for a story man. really Soul Eater, Yu Yu Hakusho with an urban feel. LoL. now you could even add reoccuring question throughout the story on "why" exactly the grim reaper did this instead of following orders. is he/she trying to help the main character, or does he/she have a less noble alterior motive? immediately after i got done reading your summary i got to thinking that either the grim reaper is a rogue (fallen angel, or renegade demon) who is posing as a reaper to assemble an army of supernatural warriors (the perfect excuse to add more characters and spirit weapons), or maybe the reaper knows that "something" is about to happen in the human world that will require a hero who isn't exactly squeaky clean in the life deeds department. a kind of dark savior who'll be able to trump evil by beating it with its own artillery. i dunno, dope idea though. i know THAT was a lot, but yeah. thats how i get with stories. LoL
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dude thx that tattoo thing is a really cool idea also the thing about why the reaper is doing it i was thinking its just because he was lazy and wants ppl to do his work for him but those ideas that u sed r way better but i dont think i want demons him to collect demon souls i just want him to collect regular dieing human souls so that he would eventually have to collect is dieing siblings soul but thx dude u are like a super good story writer because all this talk about this story is really getting me thinking of so many cool ideas for it maybe i well pic it back up again
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LOL for sure. well, i mention demons because they're a usual occurence in stories about people who have "been to the other side". when i say "demon" i don't mean the common Christian archetype of what makes a demon, i mean more of a race of beings who come from a harsh world which calls them as such. demons in the way i mean could be good, bad, or neutral, like humans. but yeah, the grim reaper would need a reason behind his actions considering putting a human (even more so a not so great human) in charge of your soul collecting duties would piss more than a few people off.
yeah, i dug the beads thing too. defense and offensive weapon, and they could be used as a power check, since beads are supposed to have a spiritual significance to the wearer, be it balance, focus, a link between mind and body, etc. stories with gods and demigods are dope, so you always gotta blend things up and use every spectrum of creature as a kind of foil. Lol
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yeah man u really now ur stuff when it comes to writing man if only i was i would totally still be doing my comic Demigod comic instead of sitting there and doing the first 7 pages over and over because the story kept changing and not making sense
and yeah i im problly guna make a character that has some beads that would be kick ass
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well shit man if you're down for a collab i'm your man. all you have to do is keep the climax in mind. everything you draw is building up to a peak moment, kind of like (forgive the comparison) sex. even though you catch yourself getting side tracked with other things, you can use the climax as a motivator to get you there. its really not hard dude, and with your talent you could probably bang out chapters to a manga in no time flat. i wish i could freaking draw, but like i said, i can barely handle stick figures. the beaded demon monk man, i'm telling you. LoL. he'll be serene and peaceful, but a total BEAST when it comes to throwing down. the only thing keeping him from going blood drunk are those damn beads. LoL
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yah no what yeah dude lets do it, i actually have a lot of other stuff to do like this game we are making a nd this commission (which im doing for free) but all that shit can wait lets try and do at least one chapter so if i give u a description of how i think all the characters i have act and stuff could u like make a full like story dialog thing cuz that is the part i have the biggest problem with being able to put it into the dialog and when to end the chapter
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alright, awesome man. i'm totally down. send me whatever you have, and brief overview of the story (which i more or less already have down) and we can make a chapter as a test run. writing is my thing, so its nothing but fun for me on that front. so do you want a script, or an actual short story describing things as they happen and what is being said?
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i want like a script of dialog in the constraints of a chapter with that like hook climactic end that just makes u want to find out whats guna happen in the next chapter u know like when u read a chapter of ur favorite manga and then at the end something happens and ur like ah i gota see what happen next
oh and the main character his name is Jay and i kinda want to be the gangster type but he really only does it for his lil bro
ill send u the rest of the characters that i have created for this story in a note k
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alright, so as an example you want:
Jay rushes down the dark the street, an occassional street light illuminating his figure, and into an alleyway where a crouched figure hovers over his little brother.
Jay's little brother: JAY !!!
Jay points his soul gun up at the crouching creature, its figure hidden by a dingy trenchcoat.
Jay: hands at the stars asshole !!
the creature turns to face Jay
Jay: you so much as make one more breath in his direction and i'll paint the walls with your fuckin brains !!!
the creature hunches into a fighting position, and then lunges at Jay, teeth and fangs beared.
Jay: dumbass...
Jay pulls the trigger on his gun just as the beast jumps high into the air, the crescent moon reflecting its slim, sinewous figure.
end
something like that yeah? send me whatever you got for characters, plot, and the world in which they live, and i'll start ASAP.
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ok s sorry took me so long to reply i was writing the character descriptions but just read this and yeah totally dude something just like that the silhouette in the moon thing is fucking awesome and this would probably be like the second chapter or something but yeah that was kick ass u captured jay real good
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LoL nice. i just used that as an example. doesn't have to be in the story, but we can use it if you want. cool. i'll take a look.
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This is incredible! love the perspective. Man, you're going places, I have no doubt!
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Well just so you know, I'm not nice, I'm mean and honest. So what I say is true!
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Very cool, I personally can't work well with markers. I make far too many mistakes.
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oh there are many mistakes in this as well
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