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ANIMALDRAGON — walking amongst the stars [ocs | SPEEDPAINT]
Published: 2017-03-30 16:55:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 232; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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WOW WHAT IS THIS PROPER ART??heck yeah i havent done lineless art in forever and honestly i remember why now
like its not that much effort in the cheat-y method i do it lol but im still having problems with it smh
im really not all that proud of the background but i had not a clue what to with it so ill just roll with it :'3
ANWAYS i dont have much else to say so heres the speedpaint uvu
www.youtube.com/watch?v=hPwm6b…
PS ALSO i enabled critiques, but would like it if you'd educate me on the drawing itself!! i know the background is really weird and doesnt look right so if ur using the critique option that would be cool :'D
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Comments: 14
This is very pretty and I love the background. I did notice a few things though.
Shading. There are a few spots that could use a little more shading, like on the front left leg and the wing; they look flat. This isn't a big problem, but I thought I'd just mention it. The tail could also use a little more shading, it looks a little flat.
The texture in the mane looks out of place. Because there's no texture for the fur or anything, putting a texture in the mane looks a little weird. Again, not a huge deal, but just something I wanted to point out.
The back leg looks like there's a chunk taken out of the top. This might just be because you drew the lower half too far back.
I recommend maybe giving your character a shadow; they'd look a little more "realistic"(Wasn't sure how to word that).
I do really like the grass and night sky. They go well together and the lights in the sky look great. They really add to the drawing!
Other than the back leg the character's anatomy looks good. The eyes look amazing. I think the lack of a mouth suits this picture, as if she's speechless and silently gazing in astonishment at the view presented before her.
Great job on this, I'm impressed.
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thank you so much for this critique :'0
i can see all of your points haha ill try to apply them to my next drawing!!
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You're so very welcome!! Glad I could give some helpful advice!
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o this is awesome buddy , i really love her otomany and the ligth affects in the sky so cool
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hnnnn asdfghjkl <333 thank u so much!!
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Hehe asdfghjkl <3 your most welcome buddy
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I Think the background looks good! And so does the entire image, It so pretty. *-*
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aaaaa <3333 thank you so muchhhh ;0;
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The background and everything else looks gorgeous <3
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aaaaa asdfghj <333 thank u!!!
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I LOVE THE LIGHTNING AND SHADING AND BACKGROUND STUFF IN THIS WAA
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WOWIE!!! THANK U ELI ASDFGHJK IM REALLY GLAD U LIKE MY BACKGROUND MOSTLY BUT THANK YOU : DDDDD
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