SatansSyn [2013-07-28 15:43:45 +0000 UTC]
Okay, you want a critique. Dont hate me.
First of all, its really good. I have seen portraits and studied them when I was in college and this is actually very good art.
It's proportionate, symmetrical and it actually looks like you.
I love the smirk, not many people can get the lips right, they always make them off center so awesome that you did that.
Same goes for the nose, it looks like it is you, its not crooked or to the side and it looks like you were patient with it and u KNEW what you were doing.
I cant draw worth shit so this is just awesome, for me.
The ONLY thing I will say is that the shading needs a little work.
Shading it difficult, like really difficult, so it's alright.
The picture looks dark because of that and if you erased the shading on one side or lightened it a little, it will brighten up the whole thing. It's taking focus away from ur features and how perfectly you've drawn them, really.
Just use it very lightly, give a hint of a shade and that's about it.
I love how it turned out and I love that you are a better artist than me ... someone who is twice ur age...yeah.
I would give this 5 stars man, I see only one slight issue and that isnt even that important.
I love itΒ
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