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Published: 2009-09-23 18:54:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 1027; Favourites: 25; Downloads: 32
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Next page: [link]This comic is basically about what's on Riko's mind.
I forgot his stockings in the first panel and he doesn't wear a halo when he's sleeping, but alright. xD;;
FIRST PAGE. YAY.
New comic style perhaps? I'm not sure, but if I plan out pages a little differently I might be able to use it for the Blood-Sports. Who knows.
The narration is pretty much self-explanitory.
Poor Riko.Riko, picture © Mine.
Fudged around with it too much to call it traditional art any more.
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Alright, well, I think this was quite an improvement from doing your usual style of drawing the boarders traditionally. xD
Anyhow, I really do like how this looks. The clean boarders do make the art look a lot less messy than your usual comics. They also add a little more mood to the comics. Nice effect of showing the first 2 panels as a dream by blurring it slightly. It does sort of help the reader understand where he/she is at the moment.
One thing you can do though, is to type write the sound effects. I suggest using a bold font for them. Normally, fonts help show what kind of noise is being portrayed aside from the way it's written in the word art.
Hehe... pretty long comment... I'll leave more citiques and long comments like this on the other pages... 
great work so far but there's still some room for improvement. ^^
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PRETTY MUCH YEAH I hate borders. :C
Thankiess. <3 Yeah I think I'm gonna keep doing these kinda borders. Might take a little more time than usual but hey it's pretty.
Yay you're the first one to notice the blurred borders! :'D COOKIE FOR YOU MISTER *Force feeds cookies lol*
Yeah, I'll do that next time. 
YAY <33333333333333333333333333 Thank youuuus. 83 I'll improve as much as possible in the next few months so I'll be ready for the Blood-Sports. You'll be proud of me I'm sure. xDD
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Me too... That's why photopshop's there. xD
You're welcome. <333
Hhehe... awwww... nom noms... <333
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Your style is actually how I am going to draw my comic, nothing colored except eyes, gunshots and blood.... only I didn't know that was how YOU draw... I just had the crazy idea one day. THANK YOU FOR SUBCONSCIOUSLY GIVING ME AN IDEA!
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LMFAO ok. xD Welcomes I guess.
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Aw, I feel sad for Riko, DON'T GO BACK, NEVER LOOK BACK! D| lol
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xD aww poor thing.
Nice job on the 2nd panel 8D
Riko: FANGIIIIRLS! D8
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xD Indeed. Thanks! 83
XD LOL.
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Oh my, devil Riko on the run!
Great why to make an entry to the comic ^^ Makes me thirst for moar pages!
Are that fireballs? Saying.. bang?
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Indeed! 83
Thankies. >w< I thought I'd make a DRAMATIC ENTRY to the comic. It will only be 3 pages though.
More like plasma-pistols shooting those things.
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OwO
That's oki, as long it got an ending just as epic as the entry
Ah, I see X3 But even then I dun feel easy to settle with the Bang! sound effects. I mean, come on Woman! Your boyfriend got famous for his origenal sound effects in comics!
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>w<
8D; Yeah I kinda failed there lmfao. I didn't know what else to put there. xD;
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Next time, go ask Raffy >8O
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xDD I will, though I've seen that sound effect in some other comic books before, so 'scuse me.
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