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AnimatorWannabe — FF13_Mz. Anonymous
Published: 2010-05-02 03:19:02 +0000 UTC; Views: 584; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 18
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"I wanna know, I wanna know (Your name)Your name, Your name
Why you gotta be Anonymous?"
Song: Anonymous
By: Bobby Valentino
B/c Lightning is a bad mofo! Straight up! :\
OTL I fail, it's okay...
Tried to do something in SAI for a change.
Next time I'll be more serious, and get my settings back for my brush, since I screwed it up...
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interesting style reminds me alot of wangan midnight or initial d.
i'm curious your name animator wanabe u interested in animation?,
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Really? To tell you the truth I've never heard of the first one, and I never was interested in initial d b/c of the cars... >.>
Yes, actually. It's true that I'm a wannabe in that department only b/c I can't animate as well as I hoped. Unfortunately there wasn't a lot of teachers who knew a lot about animating in the schools I went to, hopefully there's one out there who could teach me...
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i've done alot with flash but any i've done usually bog down bad.
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aww, i really need to practice more, there are several projects that i've started, i just seem to procrastinate a lot.
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lol Thanks so much! 
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(: ur welcome and thxs
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Thanks so much!
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so good ! : )
thankyou for adding my photo to your collection btw : )
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Thanks so much, I'm flattered!!!
of course hun!
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Thanks so much hun!
Hopefully next time they'll be straight! lmao.
Thanks for the fave as well!
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Well anatomy-wise this is not bad at all, however I agree with eiyuu down there, the nose does seem a little flat, more curve is deffinetly needed. but also the right eye seems lopsided to the left, in other words if you were looking at her from directly infront her face would be slanted; not only that but the left eye is a little too far to the right of the image(left of the face... wow this is so complicated XD XD) remember the distance between the eyes should be enough to fit another eye, so at an angle like this there should be slightly less space available.
Flipping the image whilst working on it is a very good technique to get a good feel for what your image looks like whilst making it, flipping, zooming out that sort of thing. Get a feel for every little part of the picture.
Nice work otherwise, hope to see more soon.
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Gah, thanks so much. Yeah, I was wondering about her right eye and nose. I plan on doing parts of the body one at a time, that way I can practice and get those parts down. Thanks so much for the critique. I really appreciate it! I'm gonna start back up now!
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not a problem, good luck.
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I see you've improved with the hair. 
For her face, good skin palette; only thing I noticed is your light source, her left eye (the viewer's right), and her nose. Her left eye looks a bit too far away and isn't in line with her right eye. Also, basing on her hair, it looked like the light came from above her head, while on her face, it seemed more like it's on her left side. Her nose also needs to be a bit more curved by the nosebridge, and is slightly not aligned with the tip.
Other than those I've mentioned, I think this is actually good.
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Yeah, I notice these things AFTER I submit them. I was having trouble with the eye, I tried to find references for the face, but it was hard to come by, next time I'll probably use myself as ref though.
I'll do better next time, I think lighting is my enemy as well. I'll submit the next pic in scraps, that way I can just fix it and upload it to my main gallery afterwords.
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One thing I do when sketching is flipping the sketch, to see if it looks right on different angles. You can flip it on PS on image>rotate canvas>flip canvas horizontal.
Here's a lighting tutorial that could help you out.
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Oh, cool, I'll try that out too!
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