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anime4ever79 β Demonairs character poster
Published: 2014-06-26 20:18:51 +0000 UTC; Views: 678; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 0
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My own version of a poster with my main original characters. It's not my greatest work, I believe. I probably will in the future I might change a few things about my characters. But lets see what happens.Related content
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Nice job here! This gives me some ideas for my own panel pieces!Β
I like the arrangement of the wings and faces and it adds drama. It almost animated itself on my first impression. Just wanna say the eye thing. My. Gosh. Only see one eye per character, then BAM! Both eyes, BUT they are both different! You have got some damn substance here! Your lining is pretty good, and what isn't can be fixed with a ruler (your panels are a bit crooked, but maybe you took a picture and it looks off? and your first 3 panels' text is not balanced) or before final ink.Β
A few things, though. I would spell out we're to 'we are' and maybe add 'the' after that. It has a more assertive tone which I think you are looking for here. The 'a' in "Demonairs" blends in to the bottom flare so I thought you were trying to spell "Demongirls" and forgot the 'l'. I'm ditsy though so take that as you will. In terms of your flow, I would use just one flare on the bottom text instead of separating them. In the second panel, the eyebrow of The Thief makes them look in pain. If you are going for a "baddie" look, raise the end of the eyebrow closest to the ear, then curve the end closest to the nose downwards while keeping the depression line.
Really nice work!
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Thank you for the compliment 
and thank you for the helpful advice
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I am glad I can be of service!
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This promises story!
Overall, image like this is really good ! I really want to see where this story goes! Like your charactersΒ Β
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Thank you! 
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Nice dynamic pictures. their like the extreme close up shot in an action moving. so cool.
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Thank you!!!
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Very nice creativity and looks like you are on the road to really creating their personalities. Nice job. Thanks for submitting to the group, much appreciated.
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Thank you I really appreciate it
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You are very welcome.
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Wow! This looks like an awesome poster! Is there a story behind it? ^^
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Thank you and yes there is a story though it is still being developed.
Though a brief summary (Though this plot may be changed) is that human are at war with demons. There is a demon portal out in the world that is sending wave of demons. No one however can find it since it changes every three days and is at a new spot around the world and the portal is invisible to the human eye. The only thing that was slowing down them were sorcerers, however they have now become extinct. Humans believe they are to be doomed, however one girl named Laila who is half demon (though no one knows what kind of demons she actually is) doesn't believe that and thinks they still have a shot at winning the war and plans on finding the portal and closing it once and for all freeing humanity. But she is going to need a squad in order to help her with her mission and she hopes to learn more about who she really is.Β
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Wow that sounds interesting!
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OuO ah I can so imagine this as a poster! Well executed. I always have the urge to redraw pictures like this, even when I don't actually know the Β characters because I feel like there's a whole story behind it.
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Love the composition. what do you plan so far?
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Currently I'm still working on the plot and my characters. Though I'm still having problems figuring out a plot that doesn't feel overused and dull.Β
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You can note me the plot if you want.
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Ooooh! It looks so awesome! OWO I likey!
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Thank you so much that means a lot to me
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You're so very welcome dearie!
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Thank you so much
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your wleocme^^
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